| "Where Sunrays can't reach you" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lady Yui On: January 24, 2003 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I totally love this story. Poor Treize, he doesn't deserve this. I like how he and Milliardo interact and do other stuff :) Seriously: your lemons are very good and leave me wanting much much more!.
Can't wait for the next chappie.
Love ya. |
Reviewed By: Daremyth [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 14:42 CST
Comment/Review:
OY!! ::whine:: gah! I really wish authors wouldn't just suddenly end their chapters like that...
-Daremyth |
Reviewed By: Aria On: January 13, 2003 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I replied before and it was awsome! I hope you write more soon. I absolutly hate cliffhangers and you must finish it and add a lemon! I hope you write more really soon since my promise from last time still stands. So write again soon...
Or else... |
Reviewed By: Talyssa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 00:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Sorry no ratings. I'm bad at them. So...
OKay now honestly, how could I say anything bad about a yummy lemon chapter?? the lemon was much anticipated and pleasantly fulfilled, although I was a tad confused when treize suddenly became rough instead of gentle. I didn't understand that transition very well. I'm a little fuzzy on zech's reaction too, although I understood it a little better. Explanation in the next authors note? or maybe look at the chapter again and see what you think. I read it kinda quickly so maybe I just missed something. |
Reviewed By: Talyssa On: January 06, 2003 01:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh well, another from me. Late because I was away for the week but still good right? ^_~ Now we're getting to the good part aren't we. hee hee. Lets see, what to say. I'm glad you didn't let that guy get too far with zechs. I think the entire story is well plotted, really. And...ummmm.....Do you want people to do those 1-10 ratings? This makes for your 7th review...but since 3 of them are from me I'm not sure how much that counts. Maybe people dont' like 13x6 anymore? Chh, they just have bad taste. More soon I hope. |
Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 00:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*SCREAMS AND PULLS HAIR OUT*
You can't stop THERE!!!!!!!!
*runs around like a fool*
I really am enjoying this fic, please...more... |
Reviewed By: Talyssa On: December 18, 2002 01:07 CST
Comment/Review:
awwww you can't stop there!!!! thats awful. what a cliffhanger.
T_____T
I just want treize and zechs to get together dammit! ::sniffle::
I think I'll just keep reviewing every chapter since no one else is and you deserve reviews! |
Reviewed By: Talyssa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2002 19:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Oooooooh this newest part was sooooo good. I dunno why you only have two reviews! you deserve oodles more. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: PhoenixFlame666 On: March 23, 2003 15:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why haven't you updated in ages? I want to know what is going to happen Damnit! If you are hving trouble getting ideas, give me a buzz at
footballpyro777@yahoo.com and bounce some ideas off me! I would be glad to help and I want to know the end of this story and how it turns out.
P.S. I want a happy ending too,
Or else...... |
Reviewed By: Daremyth [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2002 05:59 CST
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::sniff:: and, of course, you leave it off there. ::sigh:: ::shakes head:: what is WITH authors these days...? |
Reviewed By: MoonDaughter [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2002 18:11 CST
Comment/Review:
An excellent beginning to what I'm sure will be a great story. Keep going! I'd like to see how this turns out. :) |
Reviewed By: Dark_Fox On: December 18, 2002 15:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool. i love ur story. keep it up |
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