| "Who Wants to Live Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: ssgsrsg On: March 23, 2008 19:38 EDT
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That was beautifully written, and argh so sad! I'm crying and no story has made me do that in ages. Good job, it was a really nice and bittersweet tale.
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Reviewed By: Marvin Kitfox On: December 10, 2007 08:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the most beautiful, piercingly sad yet warm story Ive ever read. Now you have me crying long tears.. Have you any idea how embarrasing it is for a 40-year old guy to be bawling his eyes out at his desk? That'll teach me to read fanfics at work! Thanx for this very memorable moment.
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Reviewed By: saim On: August 12, 2007 23:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I should hate you, but find myself loving you. You see, you've made me have an emo episode. This story is very well written and makes you actually feel the emotions, hence the emo-sode. Keep writing and I hope all goes well. Saim
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Title: A MASTERPIECE OF THE HEART! BRAVO!!
Reviewed By: EuphorikRhythm@aol.com On: March 16, 2007 23:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that this is the first Bulma/Vegeta fanfic that has made me cry. Reading it reminds me of the events that followed by mother being diagnosed with breast cancer and her death when I was eight. I'm seventeen now, and I completely feel that this is a lovely story of how a family should stay strong through the hard times. I'm writing this with tears in my eyes--tears of thankfulness because reading this reminded me of my mother. After reading this I thought back on the day when she died and in those brief moments before her eyes closed she held me. It never dawned on me that for the past year I haven't thought about my mother's death from cancer (I've always tried to repress it because it only brought sadness.)This story forced me to face her death once again...but with a happy light of the joyful memories we'd share. This story made me realize the importance of family and how love does last forever even after the death of a loved one. Thank you once again! This is a masterpiece of the heart. --Gina
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: sharna a.k.a thoughtless On: January 17, 2007 17:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic so much, no matter how many times i read it, it still makes me cry, lol. yea cancer is a mean thing! lost my gran to it, been running all the 'Cancer research' fund raiser things over in the uk. keep them good fics coming.....you rule!!!
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Title: AWESUMNESS
Reviewed By: Goten's Girl On: January 11, 2007 21:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was one of the most emotional I've read. It was very very beautiful. I want 2 finsh reading "Legacy" 2. Very good.
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 07:32 EST
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too sad. that;s all i've got ta say ta that. toooo sad. Good thing this is just a story. Their just a atsory anyway. ah well. loved it, you have good writing skills. keep it up. :)
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Reviewed By: Kaoriel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 23:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is incredible! It's so sad, but it gives you such a good feeling at the same time. I love it, I read it every day.
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Reviewed By: CrimsonSin On: August 22, 2006 01:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
such a beautiful story. my hat is off to you. it may have been a depressing fic but it was so moving. never before has a fic touched me the way this has. many times throughout the course of this story i found my self holding back my tears, telling myself it was just a story. however, in the end i couldn't help myself. i cried. there's no other way to put it. you captured the emotions of the characters so well. i myself lost my grandfather 3 years ago from lung cancer. the way you portrayed the feelings of all the characters was overwhelming. so real and believable. i remember feeling such emotions many times during my grandfather's fight. everyone stayed in character as well. i could hardly picture vegeta crying but in such a situation, i can't see him doing anything else. in closing, i simply love this story. so beautiful and well written it moved me to tears. when a fic makes you cry, then you know it's good. keep writting excelent pieces like this one. i send your mother my love and wish her the best of luck.
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 01:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No matter how many times I read this, I always find myself in tears. It's beautifully written and has a strong purpose behind it. You should take pride in this story, it is deserved. MG
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Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 03:06 EDT
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I'm not quite sure what to say. I don't think I will ever read this again, I wont need to the story and its meaning will be with me forever. Your presentation of a subject that no woman wants to think about let alone experience is so riviting, so full of emotion. Thank you.~Fanilia
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Reviewed By: Mia Skywalker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 08:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though I beta'd this and I've read it I don't know how many times, it still has the ability to reduce me to tears every time I read it. I love this story, Rea. It's always going to be one of my favorites.
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Reviewed By: Vegetasonlygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 16:51 EST
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Wow...I don't like the pairing B/V But this story is totally beautiful....*favs!!*
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Title: beuatiful
Reviewed By: kagomereborn not signed in On: January 05, 2006 21:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was beautifully written. the protrayal of the characters, well you could see it was hearfelt. I thank you for sharing this with me with everyone that will get to read this. and I pray the the fire and soul that burned in this story continues on to strenghten your family
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Reviewed By: LadyTonyaSerene [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 12:33 EDT
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Your story is simple, but it is beautiful in its simplicity and it touched me. Keep writing like that. I hope your mom keeps fighting.... and I hope she wins. Ja ne.
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