| "Vegeta's Forgotten Family" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kaoru27 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 17:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for your reviews. I feel so special *sniffs her nose and dries her eyes. |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 21:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I really like your fic! I hope you continue it soon! I like fics that have extra added characters, your are really good!! Well donE! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great this is so good. keep up the good work and I'll keep reading |
Reviewed By: Kaoru27 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2002 09:41 CST
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Well you know what Megumi10 I love cliff hangger endings so you will just have to live with it. |
Reviewed By: Megumi10 On: November 28, 2002 08:02 CST
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I hate you! Why havn't you wrote anything since you got home. OUR story is looking good expect I forgot to tell you. I hate clifhanger endings. Write more! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2002 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good fan vic and I like it alot keep up the good work and Ill keep ready even though sometimes it would be a little bit late. |
Reviewed By: Kaoru27 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2002 17:37 CST
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Feel your rath uh? What rath, you don't have what it takes. I really shouldn't be saying this because you know how to get a hold of me. Oops. I am sorry that I spelt your name wrong. I will correct it. |
Reviewed By: Megumi10 On: November 23, 2002 12:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Listen Karou, everything was the bom ( he he he)
but you spelled my name wrong in the first chapter and it is part my story. Other then that, the begining was super. And to think you didn't need my help ^_-
Continue writing... OR you'll feel my rath
PS write more of your book story. |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: November 23, 2002 11:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey..what a great fic! keep going! I wanna know more on whats gunna happen! |
Reviewed By: Megumi10 On: December 06, 2002 16:19 CST
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I HATE YOU! Don' tforget to mention Megumi's power or i will kill. you said you would post chaper 6 before i got on the internet? Well don't forget to tellour readers at home that i I mean megumi can read minds aswell, but can be detected(sp?) write more!!!
toodles ^_* |
Reviewed By: Megumi 10 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 19:44 CDT
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your such a dork. well now that you have the internet back you can continue wrighting. you now what, we havn't got anything accomplished and there are already like 17 chapters. sorry to all the readers that are wondering whats going to happen next but kaoru and I are working on a Rourin Kenshin story at the time and we have a HUGE writers block. Karou WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is a good ch 2 keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 22:22 CST
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A very good start for a fan fic keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Megumi10 On: January 18, 2003 15:09 CST
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hello this is the co-writer here. You'll love what happens between Gohan and Megumi. Also Kaoru and Goten. Just keep reading and reviewing and we'll get it up in no time
^_^ toodles |
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