| "Within a Heartbeat" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Felidae5 On: May 25, 2004 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack! what? Where's the rest? c'me on, you can't leave it hanging there like that! Pwease?
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Title: is that it? *blink blink*
Reviewed By: Firekitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 20:20 CST
Comment/Review:
........... that was too short!!!! Now I'm gonna go crazy wondering what is going to happen next!! Write more... PLEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Someone On: December 14, 2002 23:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Write more I want to find out what happens. |
Reviewed By: Me On: November 28, 2002 20:20 CST
Comment/Review:
What the **** happens next? I don't like cliffhangers |
