| "In The Arms Of An Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mel On: February 13, 2003 00:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
All right! Constructive criticism! (Translation: Don't take this the wrong way!) ^^;; It might be a good idea to stick with one tense. Switching between tenses can be annoying at times... It might help if you got a beta or someone to just check over the grammar...
Other than that, this is a nicely thought out fic. Very original. ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 18:32 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm glad you ended this on a happy note. I'm also glad that Jou and Leo have a second chance. That's cool. I hope you can post the sequal soon! I'll look forward to it. |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very well writing story. I like it very much and can't wait for the next story. Keep up the great work |
Reviewed By: Iczer6 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 09:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay you have an error here. The term you want to use for 'brother' is ni-chan not nee-chan. Nee means 'Sister'.
Icz |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: January 22, 2003 18:33 CST
Comment/Review:
I like that way you wrote that chapter. I'll look forward to the epilogue to rap everything up. Please post it soon?! |
Reviewed By: flower_goddess On: January 15, 2003 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH PLEASE MAKE THE FINAL CHAPTER COMEOUT NOW I CANT WAIT.*JUMPS AROUNDS SCREAMING:ME WANT LAST CHAPTER*OK I AM TO HYPER NOW.*SMELLS COOKIES*O_O
YUMMY COOKIES BYEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: YamiSeto On: January 15, 2003 17:39 CST
Comment/Review:
plz keep on writing i luv it sososo much!!!!!!!!!!!1 |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 23:18 CST
Comment/Review:
WAI!!!!!! I SOOOOOO can't wait for the next chapter!!! Ya gotta save Yuugi!!! *is on a sugar high* |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: January 14, 2003 18:28 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a good chapter. I hope Seiya can save Yugi and they have a happy ending. Are you going to do a sequal to this maybe about how Joey meets Leo again or something? I hope you post the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: mtlxiaoangel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 08:45 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG...YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE!! IM GOING CRAZY!! THIS IS THE BEST FIC EVER! *regains composure* sorri about that...yeah...^^;; Well, please continue!! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: January 05, 2003 21:17 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a sad chapter, but it did clear things up a little. Will Yugi help in the fight? And does Yami/Seiya know that Yugi is an angle too? I hope you post the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: mtlxiaoangel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 23:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh this is good! I'm loving it! Email me upon update please! xoEnchantedAngelxo@yahoo.com
~*enchanted angel*~ |
Reviewed By: Serene Jackson O'Neill [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 09:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU'RE EVIL!! Stopping when Yuugi became an Angel. It's pure evil! Anyway, I love your fic and hope you will update it soon! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: December 31, 2002 00:37 CST
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That was a great cliffhanger! How did Yugi die? Has been dead for long or did Cerius kill him will he was unconscious? I hope you update this really soon, this story is getting more interesting! |
Reviewed By: EarthAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is so different then others I have read. Please continue. |
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