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Reviewed By: Kitty Kat On: November 27, 2002 00:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That totally kicked ass! I love it so far! OMG! CONTINUE! That was so coolers. Yami ish so mean, but I still love him. Your fic is so original, and well written. I really like it. Ryou and Bakura thing was expected, yet not..so it was all WHOA when you read the last chapter ya know. Ignore me now, I know I sound high. Oh well, I'm basically always high..high on Yami's..er..hairgel fumes, yeah.. -turns on radio- For being such a good writer, you get to hear me sing something from Smile dk! Ay ay ya-ay I'm your little butterfly, ay ay ya-ay, green black and blue, making colours in the sky. Hehe..damn DDR..in my head. Anyways. Like ficcie..continue..or I will murder you with MORE SMILE DK! >_>; |
Reviewed By: Shaina Carney aka Angel Wolf On: November 26, 2002 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it I can't wait for more. I hope you'll add
Keora and Yama in this story. |
Reviewed By: CeCe On: November 25, 2002 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of my favorite fanfics please you must continue you are an great writer. |
Reviewed By: CeCe On: November 25, 2002 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of my favorite fanfics please you must continue you are an great writer. |
Reviewed By: CeCe On: November 25, 2002 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic please you must continue |
Reviewed By: Shaina Carney On: November 24, 2002 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it more, more and you can use my characters freely.
To know more about them read Trial By Cards on fanfiction.net by Angel Wolf.
(thats me). |
Reviewed By: Shaina Carney On: November 26, 2002 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this I can't wait for more. Muses are good and bad at times.
My muse ( crazy mini yami thingy) made me write another chapter for
Trial By Cards. Grief I never intended it to end up like this.
Yami Rae: Right, silly hikari fell in love with Ryou.
Shaina: Well he's so cute and innocent for a cartoon.
Yami Rae: Oh and now she likes Bakura too.
Shaina: Shut it Rae. |
Reviewed By: Shaina Carneya.k.a Angel Wolf On: November 23, 2002 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this it is awsome. can't wait for the next chapter.
Ur Friend,
Shaina aka Angel Wolf |
Reviewed By: * i n c o h e r e n t * On: November 23, 2002 15:36 CST
Comment/Review:
:D yay another update! well this is turning out interesting..... will you be introducing honda in this fic? or does he not exist? well i love this so please keep posting! |
Reviewed By: * i n c o h e r e n t * On: November 22, 2002 23:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i do like this story. i could see why the people stole ryou... but i'm just a bit miffed that yami had to be so cruel.... but regardless this is a great plot so far. it has interest and much promise in it. hope you update soon! |
Reviewed By: Crimson Death On: November 22, 2002 18:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I am VERY glad that you decided to submit your fanfic here as well as fanfiction.net. ff.net has been removing many of my favorite fics for "explicit content" and this angered me. Grrr... *mean face* anywho...thank you for putting it here just in case those ff.net jerks decide to take it off (like "Broken Reality") DARN THEM!!!! Heh...love your fic. Write more soon. Heh...I couldn't wait so I wrote my own continuation chapter. Of course, it's not as good as yours. ^____^ I just couldn't wait for a new chapter so I wrote something to keep my love for angst and Ryou torture at bay. Heh... ^_____^ GREAT FIC!!!!! |
Reviewed By: redrose2310 On: November 22, 2002 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was soooo cool I can't wait to see more is this going to turn into one of those master falls in love with slave slave falls in love with master things couse that would rock |
Reviewed By: Sheenagami On: December 03, 2002 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah!!!!!! this is great!!!!!why'd it end so quickly?!!!!!! if y'a don't get the sequel out soon i'll just have to boil your head, i reckin'!!! 666 ^_^ 999 |
Reviewed By: Keora Kaiba On: November 23, 2002 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You can use my character Keora in your story if you want. |
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