| "Class Trip" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Saiyan Conga Line [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2002 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
true, how DO you suddenly explain why a hanyou has appeared for a class trip? why, I wouldn't mind. OoooOOOoo how springs! fun fun fun. museums, bah. hot springs are better! *cheers* great chapter! |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Conga Line [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2002 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo, I like the first chapter. and who cares if they're ooc, I love fluffy moments! yeah, 7 am is a scary time for any teen to be awake. bah. noon- now THERE'S a sensible time to wake up. ^-^ cool first chapter, I'm gonna go read the rest. and I think i'll leave a review for each chapter, cuz it's more fun that way. nice work! |
Reviewed By: inususu On: November 23, 2002 19:13 CST
Comment/Review:
when i realized i read allthe chapters i screamed bloody merder.........UPDATE!please.......there arent enough chapters to this story.....WHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAWHAHWAHWHAHWHAWHAHWAHWHAHNWHAHWHAHWHAHWHAHWHAHWHAHWHAHWHAHWHAHWHAHWHAHWHA! |
Reviewed By: Inume On: November 22, 2002 22:13 CST
Comment/Review:
That is really good.
That is so funny that Kagome's friends are spying on them and that they think that Inuyasha and Kagome like each other. I almost burst out laughing when they started arguing over whether or not one of her friends had a thing for one of the guys in gym class.^^
I didn't rate it because it was so good that it's off the rating scale.
Please write more. I can't wait to see what happens when they get to their destination. |
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