| "The Freak" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kaden Z Fukuyama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2002 10:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty Damn good. So I guess that means if the ASHITA universe ever collided with the Freak universe... Jun AND Dai could become Bat creatures. A+ Digi. |
Reviewed By: YamaiTaitosdaughter [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2002 15:57 CST
Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!! thats neat.. about the pure blood and everything.... can't wait for the next chapter... this is getting pretty suspenseful... and it still kicks ass!!!! |
Reviewed By: Misty Wildfire On: January 24, 2002 22:43 CST
Comment/Review:
awww how cute!!! ehehehe love it!!! |
Reviewed By: TG the Hyper Joshin On: January 24, 2002 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave you the five because I think you could inprove on details and some grammer. But other than that it was a great story and I look forward to the next chapter.
Sean *Biggerstaff*: Tg?
TG: Yes?
Sean *biggerstaff*: Remember what you said you would do to him for insulting HP.
TG: *smirks and throws a bucket of cold water on Brian, the bucket being filled with cursed drowned Jun water*
There.
Sean: YES! *Calls the water company and shuts off brian suply of water for a week* Muahahahaha! |
Reviewed By: Mimi, Myself, & Iz. [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2002 10:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Neato! Whoohoo! Yeah! A wonderful continuation to your story! Excellent! Great insight into Jun's "pure blood" delima after being transformed. The romance between Jun and D is wonderful and handled so nicely! ...not to mention the others as well! (grins) I hope to read the next chapters soon! I can still see this is only the beginning!
~ Jodi S. |
Reviewed By: SSJ5 Majin ajrkota On: January 23, 2002 23:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was emotional, man. Deep, loving and emotional. You have learned well the ways of the Writer. Nothing more can I teach you now. |
Reviewed By: Pyrokinatic On: January 23, 2002 23:16 CST
Comment/Review:
very nice... you got love in there and everything... i never thought jun to be pure blood.. never thought jun.. heh i never knew there was a difference between pure and unpure blood!... nice twist keep it up |
Reviewed By: DarkGatomon On: November 30, 2001 13:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, that was cool. I'm never sure what the big deal about lessies are, but hey, that's just me. Fun, though, and surprisingly well written! |
Reviewed By: Jodi S. (Mimi, Myself, & Iz.) On: November 29, 2001 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NEATO!! Another fun chapter to your story. Great in introducing the GunSmith Cats in the story. I also like your open mindedness on May and Raly's relationship... and I don't mean just them being Oni! Hee hee I also love the blossoming love between Jun and D too. Any ways, again great writing. I can't wait for the next chapter! Seeya!
~ Jodi |
Reviewed By: YamaiTaitosdaughter [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2001 16:48 CST
Comment/Review:
cooooooolies.... want more *pouts* can't write a long review dinner |
Reviewed By: Misty Wildfire On: November 27, 2001 00:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey!!! That was cool!!! ooo interestin little thing you got going eheheh its really really really good!!! |
Reviewed By: Fyres'Rage On: November 26, 2001 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome work Digifan316!
I like the plot and the factor that Mimi is a Vamp.
Later!
Rage |
Reviewed By: Kaden Zendi Fukuyama On: November 26, 2001 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS LINE "Man, what a day. Onis, demons, and lesbians." LOL IT'S GREAT good story keep it up |
Reviewed By: TG On: November 25, 2001 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE! It was coo.... |
Reviewed By: pyrokinatic On: November 25, 2001 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice way to leave me hangin' guy... i hope you get the next chapter out soon.. i cant stand the suspens and i just read it... thats good when it comes to stories though... very nice although i did find a few mistakes here and there but it's fun |
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