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Reviewed By: fuddledone On: September 28, 2012 18:31 EDT
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This was a very good story, the first chapter hooked me and each succeeding chapter validated my first impression. Thank you for sharing your imagination. |
Reviewed By: anthony 883 On: May 18, 2011 22:08 EDT
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Nodoka wins the worst mother of the year award. Poor Ranma first his father abuses him for 16 years and then his mother forces him to kill not only his father but her too. |
Title: I never reviewed this?
Reviewed By: AMWOOD co [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2010 03:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I probably first read this... at least five years ago. I've also read it about a half dozen times. It's fairly short for a multipart story, complete (a big bonus), and plays through the plot in a rather unique fashion. You rarely see first person stories, let alone from multiple perspectives. The story is significantly darker than anything I usually read, but is quite enjoyable. It has your flare of the Ranma story being suddenly shaken up and resolved in a very cataclismic manner. Some don't do so well, this one did. As a final note, I'd like to say that your Ranma stories are all enjoyable, but it would be nice to see one updated. It has been three years, after all. Well, I catch up on some of your others. There's a Naruto one that seems interesting.
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Reviewed By: Tuisto [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 20:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm pleasantly surprised to see this story on this site. I'd recommend this fiction as a Must Read Ranma angst fic to anyone. Though I'm disappointed that the sequel with Nodoka as a ghost is neither finished, nor posted on this site... oh well. READ THIS STORY AND READ IT NOW!!!
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Reviewed By: Darkfeather On: January 25, 2004 17:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: The Draven Cats On: June 30, 2003 04:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really sad story, but I enjoyed it throughly. I think it would be cool if you could do a continuation of the story about the Ranma, Akane, and the others getting their lives back in order. Plus I think it would be fun to see how Ranma and Akane react to pregnancy.
Any way, I loved the story. I think it was very original and very well written. Heck, I stayed up past one in the morning reading it. If that doesn't scream "good story", I don't know what does!!! |
Reviewed By: Ben On: February 05, 2003 21:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was sad. I feel sorry for Ranma and Akane who were forced into this but I'm glad they got together in the end. I wish Mousse got with Shampoo and maybe Ryoga with Ukyo |
Reviewed By: ALL CAPS On: December 31, 2002 10:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so highly impressed, I'm begging for more chapters or at least a sequel. |
Reviewed By: Perry On: December 27, 2002 23:49 EST
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Okay, this story was pretty tight. If there's more, I'll definitely be there to read it. |
Reviewed By: Cleao On: December 26, 2002 11:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this was deep. It was dark but not so depressing you couldn't get into it. The brillant way you handled all Ranma's engagements was cool. Even made me a fan of Kuno. Terrifc job. I hope there is more coming. |
Reviewed By: Kuno-baby On: December 25, 2002 18:18 EST
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*Sniff* This was so sad and dark. And that's why I liked it. Glad Akane was finally there for Ranma. Ranma's mother was truly a stubborn jerk! Even felf bad for Genma. *sniff* |
Reviewed By: Kiki On: December 25, 2002 18:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was such an amazing fic. Nice resolution of the fiancee conflicts and other outside troubles.I hope there's more chapters coming. I wish I could give you higher than all 10's!!! |
Reviewed By: Tara On: December 11, 2002 23:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so powerful. I really felt for Ranma and Akane. And like how you handeled the fiancee problems. Very good story. I hope you continue this. |
Reviewed By: Big_pug On: December 07, 2002 19:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like very much |
Reviewed By: Sterling_Ag On: November 28, 2002 18:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello,
You have written a very good story here. It's dark, yes. But also shows hope for the future. I appreciate the time and effort you must have put into this. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Brian |
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