|
| "Truth or Love?" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] | Reviewed By: Jessyrocks15 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 10:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story when r u going to update?
| Title: Ideas..
Reviewed By: Freaky_X [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 13:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
First, i'll tell you that i somehow like where this is going though it seems like a typical parring fic.. Well, You ask for ideas, i'll give you ideas. the first person Bra sees could be Goten.. then she'l give Marron a dare.. she have to propose to Uub... or something like that... Is that useable?
| Reviewed By: supa dupa chix On: February 15, 2004 10:26 CST
Comment/Review:
um,yeah.im not gonna blast you 2day.im 2 mature for that......yeah right.HA HA HA HA!!it's like, been months since i last reviewed.Then it was july,right?I haven't even read the story today.I practically know it off by heart.ZEMMY,IF SOMEONE LOVES UR FIC SO MUCH THAT THEY'D MEMORIZE IT,IT MUST BE A GOOD FIC!!!!AND GOOD FICS CANNOT GO UNFINISHED,OKAy?????????!!!!!! JEEZ!!!!!!!!! -supa dupa chix
| Reviewed By: Blanket On: November 07, 2003 09:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your writing style but I've seen better.I didn't see any spelling or grammers wrong. I read alot of Truth or Dare stories so it's not really origional But it's one of the best I read. I enjoyed the story overal. Like I said before I really like your story so I look forward to reading your later chapters. So keep writng you have a talent that not many people have. P.S I'm not a good speller and I'm bad at grammer so if I spelled somthing wrong or whatever I'm sorry.
| Reviewed By: Supa Dupa Chix (Run!!!!) On: July 13, 2003 23:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
GUESS WHERE I AM!!!I'M IN CALGARY,ALBERTA!!!B-4,IT WAS JUST BORING OLD TORONTO!!NOW,THINGS COST HALF AS MUCH!!!!We're going back to Toronto tomorrow,though *sniff*.
ANYWAY......Would you plez update?This is really staring to piss me off. | Reviewed By: Supa Dupa Chix (RUN!!) On: July 06, 2003 09:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
What's the point of rating?You know I luv this fic and everything about it,but YOU NEED TO UPDATE IT!!!!
Yesterday wuz my birthday!!!!I don't tell nobody how old I am,and I don't give out my name (Even though obviously,since my nickname is Sarbear,then my name has to be Sara).
Anyway,if you're having a writer's block,then do this:Bulma opens the door,so Bra doesn't have to kiss her,and then she goes to the guys' room,and on the way,runs SMACK into Goten,then she kisses him.........and you take it from there!Ta-Ta!A perfect idea!
Rate it,or I will haunt you,since I obviously chickened out of hunting you down....
-luv Supa....Dupa.......CHIX!!!! | Reviewed By: supahsa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 18:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
love the ficcy! update soon! | Reviewed By: The Hated Supa Dupa Chix!!! On: April 05, 2003 17:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Grrr.....
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Aughhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!
If u don't update during the time I've turned my back and counted to ten,I will kill you.(Nah-nah and a boo-boo!)
1.................
2.................
3.................
4.................
5.................
6.................
7.................
8.................
9.................
9 and a half.........
9 and 3 quarters.......
TEEEEEEEEENNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm sorry,where do you live again?I need to know these things to kill people,yah know.
~fin~ | Reviewed By: wynter On: April 02, 2003 18:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Please finish this fict before someone takes your idea, i'm waiting for the next seat of chacters | Reviewed By: Supa Dupa Chix On: March 28, 2003 09:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Y O U 'D B E T T E R..........................
UpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdatUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateNow!!!!!!!!!!
I'm waiting......................
That's all I can fit into my mouth in one day without suffocating.For the love of God,I may be Supa Dupa Chix,but I'm not Wonder Woman (Though I wish I had a bod like hers.........) | Reviewed By: Supa-Dupa Chix (*everybody hits the deck*) On: March 10, 2003 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo-yo-yo.Wassup wit' you,fellow fantastic authors who don't know how to update (coughcough), pansies who like Goten and Marron,and everybody in between!
Now,I gots an idea.Fellow dudes/dudettes who luv this fic (Don't matta if you an awesome person who G/B,or you a not-so-awesome person who luv G/M.....*shudder*)why don't we show good ol' Zemmy what we think of the couples?So,the next time u think of reviewing (You better or i'll come after you with a pitchfork),tell us if u like G/B,G/M (That just about killed me to have to say that),T/P,T/M,U/B,U/M,or U/P.I promise I won't come after you with a rifle and a net if you say G/M,so feel free to be truthful about what you think,huh?And,if you DO like G/M,I'm DARING you to say it out in the open!!BRING IT ON,baby!!Literally!!Everybody who luvz G/B (*wipes tear from eye*),you rock my world!!
Now,who wants to say they like G/M after those heartfelt words? | Reviewed By: Supa-Dupa Chix On: March 08, 2003 09:00 CST
Comment/Review:
OK,Zemmy,you've put this off long enough.Sarbear,Jailbird,and Tsunami have gotten so pissed off at you 4 not updating,they started to think you are afraid to update because you've decided to make Uub open the door,and you're afraid of what they'll do to you.And Jailbird and Tsunami finally put their differences aside and fused into........Supa Chick!!!
But work was not yet complete.So,Supa Chick and Sarbear fused into.........Supa-Dupa Chix!!!
And so,I was born.Ohhhhhhh,yeah,the bitch,the bookworm,and the bimbo.
So,if you'll kindly tell me ur address,I'm planning on a crusade to hunt you down!!Ohhhhhh, yeah!!
Shit,I forgot I wasn't supposed to tell you.....
UPDATE IF U DARE!!!!!!!
With luv and hate from,
Supa-Dupa Chix!!
(AKA Jailbird,Tsunami,Potti~Mouth,and Sarbear!!)
PS:I really am Jailbird,Sarbear,Tsunami,and Potti~Mouth,I'm not joking.I'm not an imposter.
Yeah,Potti~Mouth is also me,the one who suggested somebody else open the door.I just was in a kooky mood that day. | Reviewed By: Sarbear,Jailbird,and Tsunami On: March 05, 2003 08:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
J:We've decided to review every other day or so.
T:Yeah,and we have a question.Is the rating going to change in the future?
J:Meaning,is this story going to become a lemon?
S:'Cause u said,'all three girls will wake up with mates to call their own....'-
J:And our dirty mind went off with a Buzz.
T:BTW,G/B KICK @$$!!G/M KISS @$$!!
J:Tsunami?
T:What?
J&S:SHUT UP!!
T:Me?
J:Of course u.Where else would we find a Tsunami?
S:In the ocean,you silly goose!
J&T:...............
T:Jailbird,let's go send for the men in white jackets........
J:Alas,for once we agree.
S:*Dragged off*noooooooooooooo......!!!
J:Whew.
T:Whew.
J:Stop that!
T:Stop that!
J:Tsunami sucks.
T:Tsunami sucks........hey!!
J:Mwah-ha-ha-ha.Somebody stop me!
T:Yeah,somebody stop her.
J:*Sweatdrop*Anywho,I -er,we- have an idea for a dare.
T:Yeah.Marron can be dared to dress up as Robin Hood-
J:-And then she has to sit on the branch beside Trunk's window-
T:-And then she has to get one of those ukalalie things-
J:And sing a song while playing the ukalalie to Uub-chan!
S and the men in white jackets:..........
J:.......what?
T:Yeah,what?
S.A.T.M.I.W.J:That I gotta see.........
J:And so ends the review of........A B*tch,A smart @$$,an insane girl,and some guys in white jackets!!*Dramatic music comes on*
T:She and Sarbear would make good roomates.....
~fin~ | Reviewed By: Jailbird On: March 02, 2003 09:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi again.Yeah,I'm back.Luv the fic,I could go on all day.U rock.Remember,G/B kick @$$,G/M kiss @$$.This has got to be a G/B,P/T,and M/U fic.I really don't care about how the others end up (I believe I've mentioned that B4 2 greater depths ^~^)but it would be nice.Not that T/M are that bad of a couple,nor are P/U,I just kinda prefer it the other way around.
Now,if u know how much i support G/B,u know I think Goten should open the door.Or,as I think I've said B4 in a different state,Sarbear or Tsunami,I don't know,you could add a twist and make some1 like Goku or Oolong open the door.If it was Goku,it'd be dorky but funny,Oolong,a stroke of genious,Master Roshi,i think i'd wet my pants,Yamucha,odd but hilarious,Uub,I'd hunt you down,and Piccolo,I'd drown in mirth.Those are my opinions in ideas for door-openers.
I think I've got a dare.How 'bout Marron is dared to write Uub a love letter and leave it under the door to trunks' room,but trunks gets it instead,and you take it fromt there.
That's all the ideas i have 4 2day.
-Tsunami,Sarbear,Jailbird | Reviewed By: Tsunami (AKA Jailbird AND Sarbear too) On: March 01, 2003 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeeeeahhh!Go this fic!Go you!!Go me!!Go everybody who loves this fic!!
*Cricket Chirps*
Wut the hell happened 2 everybody?Dude!Oh,well. Anywho,plez make this a G/B fic,'cause a G/B fan kicks a G/M fan's @$$!!!
Okay,now.I don't care who everybody else ends up with,they can go blow a freakin' donkey.But as long as it's a G/B fic,I'm happy!!
G/B kick ass!!Right everybody?!Who's with me by my G/B side??!!
*Cricket Chirps again*.
Oh,f*ck,u stupid crickets,go to hell.
Damn I hate crickets!!
-from Tsunami,Jailbird,Sarbear,3 reviewers in one. Sarbear's the airhead side of me,Tsunami's the bitchy side of me,and Jailbird's the common sense side of me,which is y my jailbird side has only reviewed once.^~^
P.S.:If I've offended anybody in this review, i'm sorry.That doesn't mean you still don't suck crap *CoughG/MFansCough*.Oops,sorry,there I go again.
P.P.S:I just relized,B4 I clicked submit,I almost forgot to say something....
YOU DA BOMB ZEMMY!!KEEP ON SHINING!!AND IF YOU DON'T UPDATE THIS AWESOME FIC,NO MORE REVIEWS FOR YOU!! | Reviewed By: Angel_Star [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 19:18 CST
Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I can't wait! I'm dying! Please update! Oh, Make sure Ubb opes the door, Bra would kiss him and Goten would die of jealousy! Poor Panny, Bra and Marron ae very mean!
I think a way to show that the guys like the girs is making them jealous, and also make sure you let the girls jealous too!!
*Angel Star* | Reviewed By: potti~mouth On: February 20, 2003 13:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm.10,10,10,10,10.what's there to explain?not much,the way i c it.dude-er,dudette-,I freakin' luv this fic!but i gots an idea.y don't u make some1 like yamucha or goku open the door?y'know, to make it totally ironic?the couples should end the way the majority thinks,in my opinion,BTW.(G/B,T/P,M/U)i can't think of any good dares,but once i get one,i'll R and R again,K?i played it B-4,but i didn't get given many good dares.the best was eat a dog pellet the size of my thumb, but that's something u don't c everyday in the Z world,huh?
U betta update,sistah,'cause i'm gonna make like 'sarbear' and lose my mind when i really had nothing to lose!
Phooey,that's even more pathetic on paper.
-Potti~mouth | Reviewed By: sarbear On: February 16, 2003 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa.wuz that last kooky review MINE?oops.I must have.......nevermind.
I luv this fic!updateupdateupdate!!I'm losing my mind over here!
not that i had one to begin with.... | Reviewed By: Sarbear (I'm also Jailbird,the other reviewer) On: February 08, 2003 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just gave it all tens,so I don't really need to explain why.
Anyway....
MAKE GOTEN OPEN THE DOOR!PLEASE MAKE HIM OPEN THE DOOR?
Uh...........yeah,anyway.
Dude......marron can be dared by bra to stand outside the boys' door and sing a corny song that says i luv u in it,and after scream,I LUV YOU UUBU!then run away.
P.S.:If u overlook the title u might find me to be a rather normal human being. | Reviewed By: crystalgirl 1 On: February 01, 2003 22:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is the boom
write more | Reviewed By: Ultima [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is getting good so why didi you leave us hanging like that i want(no need) to know what happens | Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
UUUUUUURRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA~!!!!!!!!! You write more. Damnit, you write more NOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story was soooooo cool. I don't even usually read non-yaoi or non x-tremly violent or mean stuff. Especally when the story dosen't have Vegeta in it. If you've done that good, then you'd better finish, BECAUSE I WANT TO KNOW JUST WHO IN THE HELL OPENED THAT DAMNED DOOR!!!!! Better not have been Goten. He's mine!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! | Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoever Bra kisses, can u make sure it's not Ubbu? | Reviewed By: WonderBra [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 03:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Though I've read a heap of stories using this idea, this is definitely one of the better ones - probably because you actually have some writing talent!
Although I'm a total B/G fan, I actually think that it should be Uub who opens the door, just to add a bit of an interesting twist. Apart from that, I agree with the previously nominated couples - being Bra/Goten, Uub/Marron and Pan/Trunks. | Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are the most evil person on the face of this planet two end the second chapter like this! Hurry up and write!!!... Sorry, I'm just really exited about this. I really want to know who opened the door. | Reviewed By: Yuffie lockheart On: December 14, 2002 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is maddd cool!! please write some more itz da shit!! | Reviewed By: dOOR KNOWER On: December 10, 2002 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHO THE HELL OPENED THE DOOR! | Reviewed By: Pia Bartolini On: December 05, 2002 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I've got a good dare for Marron....sing the song "that's amore" to Uub, while petting his hair and and just generally being cheesy to the max.....oh yeah, and someone has to get blackmail videotape. | Reviewed By: yaselle [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 19:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Good so far. Write more!!
I agree with stargirl from the pairing
Trunks/pan, ubuu/marron, bra/goten | Reviewed By: Bloody_X [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 05:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really funny!!!!
Please write more, it's really good!
B.J | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] |
|
|
