| "Demon Nature" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: Darrakk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2010 03:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sooo GOOOOOOOD. I always make sure to read this again every so often. Wish you would finish the sequel.
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Reviewed By: manda On: August 13, 2005 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a great fic. I love that it is long and the plot is well developed. I hope you do finish the sequel.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: July 11, 2004 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad you updated! I'v been wanting to finish this story for some time now. But all you've done is build more suspence! I have to say that Sesshoumaru's son is a little whore!! How many women has he been with??? It's a wonder he doesn't have kids running all over the place! But hurry and update soon okay!!!
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Reviewed By: Clueless On: April 22, 2004 21:02 CDT
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You must really want a child to fall for Sess, huh? I mean it's your opinion, I mean as for me, I prefer Sess and Kagome.
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Title: Lady Goldmoon
Reviewed By: Lady Goldmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 15:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Without a doubt one of the best fanfics I've read in a long time; please continue with Demon Choices!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: December 29, 2003 11:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you going to finish this story? It's soooo good!!!!! I got to know what happens!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Electric Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 02:24 CDT
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I just spent most of the night reading this whole story and I love it. It's awesome. I hope you'll update soon. |
Reviewed By: WhisperingMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2003 02:32 CDT
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I've been keeping up with this story for quite a while. I love this story especially since I'm a R/S fan. Could you email when you write your next chapter? |
Reviewed By: Sarah On: March 09, 2003 00:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you!! Thank you!! Thank you!! You finally updated!!! I'm so happy. Those were some good chapters, but I gotta know what is going to happen next. You are so good. The original characters are so believable, as if they are actualy from the series itself. Keep it up!! I look forward for an update. |
Reviewed By: Nuala On: March 07, 2003 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I greatly enjoyed this piece. The lack of humanity in the characters - both demon and human - sent chills down my spine. Very intriguing. I applaud you for creating real original characters. Most fanfic 'original' characters are one-dimensional self-insertion characters, usually created solely as sexual partners. You avoided this and made me as interested in the original characters as those in the series.
About my only negative comment is that it is a little choppy - it reads like it was written one chapter at a time. Personally, I found myself getting slightly confused about minor characters' relationships, especially the whole reincarnation thing. I think this is partially due to the writing style and could be corrected by adding a little exposition in places and making sure that antecedants are always clear.
Great job. I await your next update. |
Reviewed By: Sarah On: February 16, 2003 02:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. You are an excellent writer. Please keep writing, I want to know what is going to happen. The characters in this story are so believable. Keep it up. |
Reviewed By: hentai_lover On: January 30, 2003 17:36 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got through chappies 6-15 today and I still say it's a very good story and you are a talented writer. I hope you keep writing. Thanx! |
Reviewed By: hentai_lover On: January 29, 2003 17:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've only gotten through the first five chappies but so far it's reall good. I'd read more but I have to go do my homework. Thanx 4 the awesome story! |
Reviewed By: YOUKAIGIRL143 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 20:00 CST
Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY BUT CAN U MAKE YOUR SENTENCES SHORTER?
PS LIKE MY TITLE SAYS WHY IS RIN A BITCH????????? |
Reviewed By: Marianne Me. On: January 18, 2003 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Long series but worth it. I'm strangely addicted to this. Excellant update. |
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