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Reviewed By: Faye-Faye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 19:57 CST
Comment/Review:
The fifth chapther was funny! And, it was also cute, of course! -^^- You're still going a good job! ^^ Hehe.
Faye-Faye =3 |
Reviewed By: NoVa On: December 29, 2002 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm nice ideal but everybody is way out of character for this fic to even be enjoyable. I think massive rewrite is called for and try to make the characters real |
Reviewed By: Chick On: December 22, 2002 19:12 CST
Comment/Review:
This is such a great story!!! And chaper 3 with sesshoumaru in the shower with the shampoo and stuff that was so funny!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: RainiSunshine On: December 22, 2002 16:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed readying this! hurry and write more!lol. i kno that writin aint easy so i pray u can keep the inspiration going. ;) listening to 'happy in love' by Smile.dk!! that group rules!lol.
ja ne,
RainiSunshine
me- RainiSunsine (aim) |
Reviewed By: Somebody Else [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2002 08:11 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this! CONTINUE ASAP!! *goes chibi and looks up at you with big, watery eyes* Please??
Angel: Aw... your gonna make her cry if you don't update!!
Chibi Somebody Else: *nodding* Uh-huh... and you wouldn't want that, would you? |
Reviewed By: Ricki On: January 25, 2003 11:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOO!! i like this chapter cuz i was wundering what happened to the rest of the gang...lol... dUDE! kiyou is pregnant...? i wunder what the son or daughter will look like... lol... that'd be cool i guess, w/e floats their boat..! :) so anyways, totally awesome story! i cant wait to see what is pulling Kagome down... maybe its a portal leading to the feudal age? or a monster? i dunno! hope Sesshou can save her in time!! he'lll poison the water! lol... ok, well this chapter rules!!! TRY ADN POST ASAP!! well ull kno ill review next chpt! u can count on that! well ttyl ADIOS!!!! |
Reviewed By: inususu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2002 17:38 CST
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^.^ great! ^.^ update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update!update! |
Reviewed By: SpaceCherry On: December 01, 2002 13:27 CST
Comment/Review:
i'm totally diggin the story please continue it!!! |
Reviewed By: Faye-Faye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 14:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is another good story of yours! It's so kewl! Keep on comin with the new chappies! Kawiaii story!
Faye-Faye =3
e-mail me when u put up another chapther! |
Reviewed By: Anna On: February 14, 2003 04:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Truly romantic and humorous. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Don't mean to be rude but, it better be soon. You can't leave me hanging like this! LOL...
Anna |
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