| "Humanity" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: DarkGatomon On: November 19, 2001 16:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Ooh, that was fun! I'm glad you made Togepi so strong, that's cool. Fun chapter, good job! |
Reviewed By: pyrokinatic On: November 20, 2001 22:31 CST
Comment/Review:
well so far you got the cliff hanger going. im reading and reviewing faster than you can make them!!. but you do have a good thing going. keep it up. and by the way it togepi and scizor just for future reference.. |
Reviewed By: Mimi, Myself, & Iz. [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2001 01:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NEATO!
Again great chapter! Lots of action as Togipi and B.R.I.A.N. encounter more R.Y.A.N.s. Now even more strange are revealed as a new mysterious entity has identified Togipi as the one! I can't wait for the next part! How does the voices in Ash, Broks, and Misty's dreams mean? Great writing!
~ Jodi |
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