| "Midnight Raven" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ick On: February 19, 2003 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really, really hated this chapter.
I know that you wanted to be realistic in this chapter but that was going a little too far.
I know that all sex scenes are not suppose to be flowers and roses.
I know that all sex scenes are not suppose to end with Duo saying "Hee-chan, you were the greatest." but come on here! |
Reviewed By: Lethanon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH! Must be moe somewhere@! *rummages through media iner to no avail* It can't be true...please write more! This is the damnedest funniest thing I've read in yonkS! |
Reviewed By: Enigma's Kitten [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 13:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT?! THAT'S IT?! Man, this was getting good! How the heck is Duo getting out of this one? Please I want some more of this 1X2 2X1 3X4 4X3! (are you going to pair up Wu-bear too?) |
Reviewed By: Goldy Gems On: January 04, 2003 20:08 CST
Comment/Review:
I loved the story up to the last two chapters. However, I know that it will not end like this. PLEASE FINISH WITH A GOOD ENDING! ;) |
Reviewed By: ~NaTaKu~ On: January 04, 2003 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story, i really do.....the last chapter was....somethin' else though, i dunno, didn't like the ending all that much, but im sure it'll get better. can't WAIT to read the rest ^_^ hurry...plz |
Reviewed By: nadia On: January 03, 2003 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
there! perfect tens, pleeeaasseee finish up! ahhhhhhhh! |
Reviewed By: Arwen Moonstar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 07:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fic, well apart from the last two chapters. it just didn't seem right to me! |
Reviewed By: Arwen Moonstar On: December 30, 2002 15:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the good work, this is a seriously good fanfic. I'll be back to finish it! So write some more soon- please? |
Reviewed By: Goldy Gems On: December 26, 2002 22:29 CST
Comment/Review:
HOW MUCH LONGER DO WE HAVE TO WAIT! STOP TEASING US AND FINISH THE FIC! |
Reviewed By: Demonica On: December 23, 2002 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHH!! Continue! ::rants for a few moments:: I wil be very happy, and people will remain in one piece. 100000 kitty treats for you! Please continue!!! |
Reviewed By: ~Element~ On: December 12, 2002 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic!! i loved it! add some more to it soon PLEASE!!!!!!!! thank you |
Reviewed By: Jo K On: December 07, 2002 12:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic so kakkoi! pleeeez finish it soon, ne?? ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Furie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2002 12:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE This is SOOO good!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Goldy Gems On: December 06, 2002 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although I hate being left hanging, I love this fanfic so far. Don't stop adding to it! |
Reviewed By: Goldy Gems On: December 14, 2002 11:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't leave me hanging here! PLEASE FINISH THE STORY SOON! |
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