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Reviewed By: hanyou rogue On: August 11, 2004 19:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's really great!!! I read "Pharaohs Gift" and I think this a great sequel!!! Keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Yunegoddessdancer On: March 04, 2003 17:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Loved it keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Yuki On: February 21, 2003 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything fits! The Pharoes gift. Then this. Its all great!
Bakura:Yuki! We have to go now.
Ryou:This story is great!
Yuki:I know! ^_^
Marik:Yukiko! I thought you were ready! We have to go!
Bakura:Say Konnichi wa Yukiko!
Yuki:Konnichi wa Yukiko.
Bakura:-_-0
Marik:-_-0
Ryou:^_^0
Yuki:What? You told me to say it!
Marik: *grabs Yuki and throws her on his shoulder*
Ryou: I want to stay!
Bakura:-_-0 * does the same to Ryou*
Ryou and Yuki: Awww! I want to stay! Oh well! Ja ne!
Bakura and Marik: You going to be late for dueling lessins! You dont want to keep Yami waiting!
Ryou and Yuki: *blushes* Ummm.... Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 05:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I kinda read both stories completely tonight so I am just now getting around to posting a review. This is awesome, there is no other word for it. some of the ideas you use are so original I have never seen them in any other fics in any genre. so Kudos to you! wait I ate my last Kudos bar earlier, Kuso! so you'll just have to settle for Pocky! wonderful writing please continue! |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 08:16 CST
Comment/Review:
*pingpong* A well rounded story, but Pharaoh's gift was way better.
*YamiPP* -_-
*HikariPP* She wouldn't let us in on her real veiw of the story, which means....O.O
*AibouPP* She has ideas for another story! We're gonna die we're gonna die we're gonna die /takes a breath/ I'm gonna throw up then we're gonna die!
*pingpong* ~_~ |
Reviewed By: Shaina Carney On: December 30, 2002 09:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it and I can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*reads chapter 12 again* oo i love a firey ryou! so adorable! *goes to the next chp* |
Reviewed By: Seto Kaiba 15 On: December 24, 2002 10:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Exilent I lovvveeeddd it!!!!
I love your stories, keep up the good work! ~_~ |
Reviewed By: Shaina Carney On: December 18, 2002 20:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it and I can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Borath [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first and probably only Yami-bastardization fic that I have ever been able to read. Thanks for giving him an excuse near the end there, and hell yes I feel sorry for him! He's one of my favourite characters. I've actually read this having only read about 2 chapters of the prequel. Told you I can't read Yami-bastardization. Kinda hooked now as I want to know what happens. Good luck with the rest of this! |
Reviewed By: Seto Kaiba 15 On: December 16, 2002 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it because it's sad, thrilling and it has a lot of nice curves. Yes I'll answer you'r question from chapter 15, I do feel sad for Yami.
I think that Seto and Yami should make up and make out. `_~ I feel bad for Seto. Yami should make up and start to LOVE YUGI, if you know what I mean. Well gotta go see ya ~_~ |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2002 08:45 CST
Comment/Review:
*pingpong* /imitating ancient person/ Only I, in my infinite wisdom, could feel pity for Yami.
*Hikari, Aibou & YamiPP* /snickering quietly/
*pingpong* /stares at them blankly/
*Hikari, Aibou & YamiPP* /snickering louder/
*pingpong* I think that this needs a little more in depth actiona and it would be fine.
*Hikari, Aibou & YamiPP* /Laughing loudly/ Yami needed that!!!! |
Reviewed By: Shaina Carney On: December 15, 2002 11:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it and I can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Yugis_girl On: December 15, 2002 04:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more!!!! Your story is really good! I wish I could write as good as you. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Nakuru Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 00:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ I can't wait to hear more. I told you I'd be back... **slightly evil-ish laugh** |
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