| "When Dreams Become Reality" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Sapadu
Reviewed By: Sapadu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 11:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
*blink*... but Fuuma's not a rapist... where did you get an idea like THAT?
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Reviewed By: y.f. On: November 15, 2003 12:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hate saying evil things, but this was disturbingly hard to read, seeing as it was just one whole block of text (which is what pulled down the otherwise high rating...). Maybe if there was some paragraphs it would make this much better. Sometimes small things can improve something unbelievably much... I'm looking forward to seeing how this would look with a few spaces. But keep writing. The first one is always just a start. ~_^
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Reviewed By: npetrenko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 19:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story.
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Reviewed By: Silent Cherub On: June 06, 2003 13:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, if you ask me, the lemon could've been a bit longer but since it was your first yaoi and pwp, I'll forgive you. :p The idea of Dark Kamui x Kakyou.. well, tis appealing. Especially since I've been searching the net for anyone x Kakyou fics.. ^_^' and finally.. I found one. Yay! *pulls out flags* |
Reviewed By: Thaliel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 09:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Geesh, poor kakyou. I know Fuuma's a psycho, but I never even THOUGHT of him doing something like THAT. |
Reviewed By: Jaittsuko_Kureiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 17:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this fic! I will admit that I'm horribly addicted to Kamui and Fuuma but this was very intriguing. The lack of spacing when they talked and lack of paragraphs detracted from the story somewhat, but not too horribly. :) Once again, I really enjoyed this. It feels like there should be something after it. ^_^ Also, very good for your first yaoi fic! |
