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Title: Love this story
Reviewed By: FireChibi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story so much but you always take so long to update that it is driving me nuts. I wish you would up date soon. I really like how you portray the characters. You give them different personality attributes then what most people do and i like that. Like Tira being all bitter because Marron didn't love her, but she married carrot after. That was cool i liked how you put in one the most popular pairing within your Gatteron pairing. Anyways i love this fic and keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Skylier On: May 07, 2004 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so great and i love it. I just wish you wouldn't take so long between each chapter it drives me insane. I can't wait to find out what happens next
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Title: the story so far
Reviewed By: Amber aka B-chan On: February 14, 2004 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like how you expressed both Marron and Gateau's feelings towards one another and how Gateau tries desperatly to try and help Marron through his problems. I hope to read more soon. Also, I think you should continue from where you left off on Ch.5..I was really getting into it at the end..don't mind me..hentai thoughts lol..^^;;
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 18:47 CST
Comment/Review:
WHAT?!?!?!?! Your stuff is great how dare they take away your self confidence! I'll kill em! I love you miko keep writing!
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Title: sooo interesting.
Reviewed By: I'm not on mm.org, but my name is Mary On: November 29, 2003 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I'm reveiwing.... after five minutes of searching for the damn review button i finally found it... ok it didn't take me THAT long... but anyway... I'm really enjoying your fic here. You need to countinue! and your a very talented writer! So write soon!
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 22:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah! more! miko you must write more, you keep teasing me with this one and it isn't fair!!!! But I still love you and your work, so ten cheers for Miko!
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Reviewed By: skylier On: October 30, 2003 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man you always end the chapters leaving me wanting more. Please don't wait so long to update this time i really want to know what happens next
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Title: Sanctuary review (Ye Gods, I'm so original)
Reviewed By: Prince Fala On: October 26, 2003 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
By the beards of Antiquity, she LIVES!!! Miko, you have no idea how happy I am to see you back. I'd alway's hoped you'd return to the BH fandom because you have so much to offer to it, and I'd especially hoped you would update this particular fic, as it is my favourite of your works. To be quite honest, I can not even read BH fanfiction anymore because I've read so much of it over the past few years (and because a lot of the new stuff leaves me . . . cold). When I recieved a notification in my e-box that you'd updated, I thought I'd give you a shot, though I still had my qualms because, hey, it's BH. Four years in a fandom does that to one. However, I also had that flicker of hope that this fic would be the first in months to not make my stomach turn. I can tell you right now that I was not dissappointed and that this particular story just might have re-opened the door I had all but closed on the BH fandom. I'm more than impressed. You've come a long way as a writer, as is obvious in this fic. You've put forth so much feeling and breathed such life into the whole story that I read it all in one sitting, positively plastered to the computer screen, even though I'd just drunk an entire bottle of water and had a semiserious need of the lavatory . . . Although that's more than you needed to know about me, isn't it? Point is, I love this fic to pieces. I want to see it set into motion once again, as I'd all but given up hope that you'd return to fanfiction after Mediaminer bought it and you caught all that caoch from fanfiction.net. Now, you're a pheonix from the ashes! Aa, aa, but I'd better stop before I wax completely metaphorical, eh? Nyeh heh. ::koff:: Erm, yes. Lovely, beautiful, stellar. More please ^_^
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Reviewed By: Damian On: August 03, 2003 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey...great fic....you make it sound so real like this was something that actaully happened. I hope you haven't abandoned it. Please continue |
Reviewed By: Tiamat On: July 25, 2003 04:33 CDT
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I love your works! Actually Reading one of your fanfictions is what got me to fall in love with this pairing! |
Reviewed By: sky On: July 31, 2003 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please keept righting....does marron die...hope not that would be really sad... |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas On: June 06, 2003 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
We love MIKO!!!!!! I'm kinda "borrowing" a friends computer (and high speed internet connection) since I still don't have internet (Grrrrr). I heard you updated this story and I had to come and read it! Kawaii chapter Miko! I think I know what Gateau is so worried about, but I won't tell in case you are keeping it secret. More soon! luv ya as always Miko! Cody-san |
Reviewed By: mysticrice On: February 06, 2003 00:35 CST
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I hope this has not been abandoned. Its an intresting road for an AU fic to take. waiting for next segmant |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas On: February 04, 2003 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't want you to quit this fic, I like it too much! Please keep going ok? |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas On: January 01, 2003 14:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwww... and once again, awwwwwwwww.... I love it when you portray Gateau in these caring, gentle giant, protective sort of rolls and he isn't focused on just himself and his muscles. (although I still think Flex is really hilarious)They just seem to fit him so well! You always pull it off beautifully. Other authors make it quite distinct when Gateau is OOC. You can tell they are trying to force him into a different role. You make it seem like that is how he has always been, and I really like that. Will you keep going with this fic...PLEASE? I swear to r&r, you know I will! Ja ne! |
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