| "Lay All Your Love On Me" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: LittleVoicesATalkinInMyHed On: June 02, 2004 02:08 EDT
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It is now 2:06 a.m.! I started this at 11:00 p.m.! (ADD) It sucks to be a slow reader! Please!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: gabyhyatt
Reviewed By: gabyhyatt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 01:34 EDT
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please update soon.
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Title: Kaoru and Kenshin A THE WAY!!
Reviewed By: Dorito On: April 10, 2004 23:07 EDT
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This was a great fan fic! I envy your imagination...I would never have been able to think of something like this. It was soooooooooooooooo SAD! PLEASE get Kaoru back with Kenshin! It breaks my heart seeing them like this! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!!!!!!!! I hope you post the next chapter soon because it is now April 2004 and you said you would have the ending written in a day or two, yet you said that back in November 2003. Thankyou for writing this, it was wonderful...Please get them back!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: *Crying a river* I can't believe it. You have to update!
Reviewed By: Yarisha The Fox Demon On: March 13, 2004 01:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm crying so hard. I can't take it. If they had a number higher than 10 on the score thing i'd swear i'd give you a damn 100. *Crying still* It's beautiful. Please please ,I beg you please update. I want to know what happens next. What Kaoru and Kenshin and Lil Kenji do now. *Doesn't feel like saying her famous line but does anyway* IF YOU DON'T UPDATE I'LL RIP OUT YOUR HEART AND LET YOU LIVE JUST LONG ENOUGH TO WATCH IT STOP! *Clinging to Jinao crying irl* Update please. I enjoyed it so much. Please. ~ Sayonara... ~
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Reviewed By: peach_blossom On: February 26, 2004 08:50 EST
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hey! it's peach here. thanz 4 the update on the story, ur the best. update the next chapter soon OK, i can't wait to read it...buh bye.
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Reviewed By: peach_blossom On: February 26, 2004 08:46 EST
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hey, it's peach here. thankz for the update on the story, i love it ur the best. pleasses update the next capter soon...i can't wait to read it...buh bye
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Title: gabyhyatt
Reviewed By: gabyhyatt [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 23:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What happen with Kaoru?
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Title: Heeeeey
Reviewed By: Chanel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 14:26 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY HEY HEY! wassup?? aight FINALLY uv updated. it's soo good please continue updating, but recently if u don't mind. Thanx!
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Reviewed By: ganda On: November 24, 2003 07:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story's great, but one thing i'm sore about is the lack of realism in your plot, at least just a little. i mean, c'mon! megumi wasn't in the least jailed for plotting to kill kaoru. that's the absordity of some fics. why can't they make some things, at least even a little to make their fics believable. i know that kaoru's kind, but i'm sure she's not a saint. anyone in their right mind (i mean all the rk char.) will at least file a complaint if someone threatens you. it's absurd that the gang forgave her that easily and sano defended her even though his friend was comatose. any guy in his position would try to at least get some sort of justice for his friend. i know he loves her, but that doesn't mean he can forgave her that easily. and to think she was scoot free and kaoru's surgeon! gimme a break! if someone tried to kill my boyfriend, i wouldn't let that person near him, even though she happens to be one of the greatest doctor in the world. try to add some poetic justice to your fic. atoning for her sins isn't enough. in real life, we all learn the hard way. hope you consider this. it's a shame coz this is a great fic. hope you don't get offended.
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Reviewed By: XD On: November 23, 2003 13:47 EST
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Whoa... well, you're making Kaoru's new character a bit more suspicious, just as what Aoshi had stated... Very suspicous... Is she just fooling around? Or affected by what those two nurses who were talking about Kaoru, when she was hald and half conscience? Hmm... I'm glad your exams are over. Geez. After my winter holiday, I'm having mine.
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Reviewed By: zeb14 On: November 15, 2003 11:22 EST
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I really want you to finish this fic! I love it. It's such a good plot and is written very well. It may be too late, you may have given up on it or something (i understand, i love to write too). But if by any chance you get this review please update. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: XD On: October 14, 2003 17:29 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked youre plot. It's so sad. What would of caused Kaoru's amenisa? Was it because, she last heard those two nurses talking about her and Kenshin, and she hocse to forget him? Or did she really have amenesia because of the blood colt in her brain vessel? I hope you get inspired soon, to continue writing this fic.
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Title: ch.10
Reviewed By: chmsweety [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2003 20:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::waves hand over here:: you gotta finish this story!!!!!!! ::shake's fist in front of eyes:: it's getting good in every chapter. i know that kaoru remembers kenshin!! stop this pretending it's hurting kenshin!!! i could feel his heart cracking at every lie that kaoru is doing to him!!! |
Reviewed By: ari On: July 01, 2003 17:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is real good i would actually brush up on megumi's jealousy and choice of men. it was fine before but now it's getting u noe, obvious and unrealistic. i'm a huge critic on fanfics but i give it a thumbs up! |
Reviewed By: anonmyus On: June 25, 2003 00:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i need more i am itching to see what happens next omg *paces back and forth |
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