| "More Than Just a Clown" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: More Than Just a Clown
Reviewed By: NarutoGriffin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 02:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story took a very unexpected turn. In the right direction!!! Great!!! Loved it!!! Please write more, maybe a Goku/Picclo ficcy?
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The excuse for Bulma was alright to me and I found that Vegeta and Goku a little OOC for instance having Vegeta all embarrased and so willing and Goku so confident and experienced considering who taught him and the ending was hilarious! All in all I loved it. Great job! *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: lee-lee On: May 30, 2004 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. I love V/G fics. ur a good writer. Please write more!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Yaoi_Queen
Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 18:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy shit! that was great!!! XD the end was VERY funny!! ^_^ for your first fic it was really good. im gunna have very NICE dreams for a lil while LMAO nice job!
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Title: Reading...MORE
Reviewed By: out92 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 02:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story and plan on reading more of yours...good writing hope to see more of your work soon....new work that is :D
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Title: i love it
Reviewed By: platiniumstar On: September 28, 2003 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
i love it i can belive its your first g/v fanfic and i hope its note your last one
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 18:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm not jealous!!
Hahaha. I loved that. Great job! |
Reviewed By: Myself On: March 04, 2003 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Two things i never thought i would see in a V/G lemon, #1 Goku being so...experianced...and dominating. #2 Vegeta blushing and embarassed. But it was very good all the same! ^.^ Keep writing, its all delicious. |
Reviewed By: Athena On: December 10, 2002 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That one was wonderful!!I really admire your powerful word picturing.
Please,explore a little more about the Vegita/Goku relationship,I know you can come up with some great stories about them.
And never stop writing yaoi!! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2002 05:43 CST
Comment/Review:
The world can always use more yaoi. ^_^ Were I to critique, I'd say Goku is fairly OOC - way to confident & predatory - and Vegeta was more compliant than I'd expect him to be. A good dosing of internal emotional exposition would be necessary, I think, to make it IC. BUT! That also kind of lends it the feel of a dojinshi! It's pretty cool, I can almost see it in my head as I read. Very, very dojinshi-esque. Please write more! |
Reviewed By: Lauryn S. On: December 06, 2002 08:13 CST
Comment/Review:
That was very good, but to short. Means only i want more to read from you in this art. |
Reviewed By: little_ninjin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2002 05:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yep! I'm hooked! Just fantastic! Completely fantastic! So that was your first yaoi? It was great- detailed, angsty, and- can I use this word again?- fantastic! Didn't seem like your first! I am so envious of your writing style. You rock! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2002 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very well writen keep up the good work |
