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| "The Price Of Power" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: PeuTiFuL JaNe On: December 19, 2003 10:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woziz ... your storee is creative and fantastic!! i gotta congratulate you on creating such a kewl read for me!! your a great writer ... so keep updating ... this is too good not to update :) !~! luff alwayz
| Reviewed By: Teela On: March 04, 2003 13:54 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You're not nuts, your creative! | Reviewed By: Lauryn S. On: February 20, 2003 20:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice start, hope of more soon.
bytheway i think ichigo had meant once raditz instead of freezer in her review. i am for sure did'nt no that Kakarottsu and Freezer are brothers *laugh friendly* but mistakes happend.
but i agree with her. don't let him be really evil, wilder and more saiyajinlike is o.k. with me too. i would love it. and i am love him this fanfiction. i would to want to catch him, if i were a there. i can understand the two womens.
will teela, is that her name?, fall for him too.
oh, please hurry up with the new chapters. | Reviewed By: Ichigo On: February 20, 2003 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. It is such a orgninal plot. One which is not done to the 1.000.000. x. so freesh and with new characters for a dbz storie. but why should this crossover not work. the two series a more together as the x-files or buffy crossovers with dbz.
I only hope you don't compress kaky/goku to a second freezer or such a cruel being. he is not and never will be even is he harsher and not anymore the friendly, naive and happygolooking goofball. let him be complexer this whole story and be the strongest. i bet he-man is nothing against him. long years ago i have looked she-ra and he-men at the tv. it was nice, but dbz is more was i like. it had more quality.
i don't mind, if he is more like the saiyajin is was born to. but i doubt that he is a evil being. he would not have gone and cared of his universum if he were.
and i doubt to that his relatives are really evil beings. neither bardock or freezer, maybe turles too(relative or not)was deep down really that evil like freezer.
But in this storie kaky is the way you have made him right down dangerous sexy in his acting.
i can barely wait of more. i really like it.
funny thing that there again womens they want to catch him like chichi had done it, but i am glad she is not in this one. i like kaky free to do what ever he want to do. | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] |
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