| "The Price Of Power" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shadow Guyver On: November 22, 2004 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad to see you are still writing. Exellent chapter by the way, very exciting! I'll be waiting for your next installment.
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Reviewed By: Chief316 On: October 16, 2004 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First time reviewing, though I've been reading your fic for a while. This is quite an original crossover. I've enjoyed reading, and will continue to enjoy the story. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: the god of dealth is back from hell On: August 27, 2004 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more soon!! Im dying to know what happens!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked Adams last comment, Gee I wonder if Adam brought along some popcorn? Will Seith be punished for her crimes? that's the burning question in my mind at the moment though... Good saga indeed Shadow Megatron
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Title: This Is The Greatest!!!!
Reviewed By: Shadow Guyver On: August 24, 2004 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is definatily one of the greatest stories I have ever read in my entrie life! The action is so detailed, the story is so original and full of unexpected twist, the characters are displayed so accurately, and the whole thing over all is just, FANTASTIC!!! You are definatily gifted with an imaginative mind and a great talent for writing. I can't wait to see how this whole thing turns out, but take your time, I don't want to rush you. Anyway, good luck, keep up the excellent work, and you hav my support!! p.s. I hope Evil-Lyn kicks Seith's butt.
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Reviewed By: the god of dealth is back from hell On: July 25, 2004 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!write more soon!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: shinigami 16 On: July 16, 2004 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more sonn. i totally love!!!! hurry up!
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Reviewed By: a fan On: May 20, 2004 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ABOUT TIME SOMEBODY WASTED THAT PATHTIC PILE OF STONES MUHHHHAAAAAAA MUHHHHHAAAAAA!!!!
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 16:11 CDT
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YAY! YOU UPDATED!!! it was an awesome chapter...but why did adam steal the orb thing? does he want a better fight or something? was it all some plan he and the scorceress came up with to get teela back to normal and to kill skeletor? please update again soon! onegai?
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Reviewed By: Ciupacapra On: May 13, 2004 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read MANY fanfics And i must say that this is one of the best i have ever set my eyes uppon . I can't wait to read the upcoming chapter!!!!!!
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Title: kudos
Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 00:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story! i came by it on accident, but im glad i did. i'm not that big a fan of he-man but you sure make it sound interesting. this is a weird and difficult combination but you pulled it off with the ease of a great writer. i have only met, or read a few writers who could make db work so well. ^_^ i eagerly await your next update, please make it soon. kudos on your originality. jackie
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Reviewed By: PeuTiFuL JaNe On: December 19, 2003 10:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woziz ... your storee is creative and fantastic!! i gotta congratulate you on creating such a kewl read for me!! your a great writer ... so keep updating ... this is too good not to update :) !~! luff alwayz
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Reviewed By: Teela On: March 04, 2003 13:54 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You're not nuts, your creative! |
Reviewed By: Lauryn S. On: February 20, 2003 20:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice start, hope of more soon.
bytheway i think ichigo had meant once raditz instead of freezer in her review. i am for sure did'nt no that Kakarottsu and Freezer are brothers *laugh friendly* but mistakes happend.
but i agree with her. don't let him be really evil, wilder and more saiyajinlike is o.k. with me too. i would love it. and i am love him this fanfiction. i would to want to catch him, if i were a there. i can understand the two womens.
will teela, is that her name?, fall for him too.
oh, please hurry up with the new chapters. |
Reviewed By: Ichigo On: February 20, 2003 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. It is such a orgninal plot. One which is not done to the 1.000.000. x. so freesh and with new characters for a dbz storie. but why should this crossover not work. the two series a more together as the x-files or buffy crossovers with dbz.
I only hope you don't compress kaky/goku to a second freezer or such a cruel being. he is not and never will be even is he harsher and not anymore the friendly, naive and happygolooking goofball. let him be complexer this whole story and be the strongest. i bet he-man is nothing against him. long years ago i have looked she-ra and he-men at the tv. it was nice, but dbz is more was i like. it had more quality.
i don't mind, if he is more like the saiyajin is was born to. but i doubt that he is a evil being. he would not have gone and cared of his universum if he were.
and i doubt to that his relatives are really evil beings. neither bardock or freezer, maybe turles too(relative or not)was deep down really that evil like freezer.
But in this storie kaky is the way you have made him right down dangerous sexy in his acting.
i can barely wait of more. i really like it.
funny thing that there again womens they want to catch him like chichi had done it, but i am glad she is not in this one. i like kaky free to do what ever he want to do. |
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