| "Midnight and Lavender" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: leelee On: July 30, 2003 17:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh yeah...Seventeen is a VERY hot piece of android...*dreamy sigh*
I loved this fic! It was sooo...cool!! ^^;;; And the emotional fight between 17 and 18 were intense! Kinda sucks that she had to die...she is the coolest female on the show... ^_~ Anyway, I wish it didn't have to end, this is one of my favorite pairings! ^_^ Great work!! |
Reviewed By: Princess Bulma On: July 17, 2003 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Great job! I really enjoyed this story, as I enjoy all of your stories! Keep up the very great work! |
Reviewed By: leelee On: July 11, 2003 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so friggin cool! I love this fic! You have to write more! I loved that you made the androids feel, experience emotions and such. I especially like how you've made 18's love for Krillin fuel her anger at her brother. This definitely is a great fic. You have to write the next chapter soon! ...Heh, Trunks is turning into his father, ne? ^_^ Update!
**leelee |
Reviewed By: little_ninjin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still blushing over the author's note. big glomps to Kaia! I'm not worthy! i'm not worthy!! *cries*
the erotic content was a wonderful surprise with ch5! oh gods it was fantasticly angsty when 17 said "no" as he came! ^^
i really like how you had bulma explain things to Trunks. It is so true to life, you know? kids are so quick to rush to judgement. When he realized WHY he was feeling the way he did...oh my god! ZOOOOOM!
i've never seen a mirai trunks who was depicted so aggressively, yet IC! I'm holdinga lighter up over my head over TRUNKS in this one....
but i am still swooning over angsty uke 17! oh! when he said "no..." oh it was so beautiful and sad!
thank you thank you thank you for the update. it was just so beautiful. so damn sexy!!!! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 22:54 CDT
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Mmmmmm, love Mirai's new attitude. |
Reviewed By: Princess Bulma On: April 07, 2003 11:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I loves it! Please write more before I go insane! ^.~ |
Reviewed By: Zack On: March 10, 2003 10:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor 17 he can't help he's evil. Now Trunks is cheating on him. Baka |
Reviewed By: skulk [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 23:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*_* You're so talented. I love this fic it captures their personalities so well. Yep, this is Nesse. I dropped by to read this, the whole thing this time, since I have only read a little bit before. And I think 17/trunks should get back together >_ |
Reviewed By: Zack On: February 25, 2003 09:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved the story, please finish!!! |
Reviewed By: Silver_Sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 08:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Kaialicious. this was really great :P Can't wait to see more ! I wonder what they will do... Review soon ! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 04:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Does no one else love this fic as much as I?
You guys suck. ;P
The bit with Trunks holding 17 down and biting him.... oooooooooooooooooohhhh... I wish my mate wasn't sleeping. Oh gawd, I love it! Murf! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 05:44 CST
Comment/Review:
:poke poke poke poke: More! Some great drama potential with 18... interesting character development of 17 dealing with the survivors... and if you needed encouragement to make the third chapter as hot as the first, you've got it. MORE HOT STEAMY YAOI SEX! WOOOO!
;) |
Reviewed By: leelee On: January 01, 2003 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wha? You mean only ONE other person has reviewed??!! My Kami... Anyway, this was one nice piece of yaoi! It's not every day you see a MT/17 fic. And I love this pairing, really! I wish I could've given you a higher rating, cuz it deserves more than a 10. ^___^ I think a sequel is in order, eh? Would like to read that one... *hentai grin* |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2002 04:42 CST
Comment/Review:
*looks around* Dude! No one's reviewed? Whimps...
Really unusual slant, suprisingly erotic, and not that unbelievable given the androids' obsession witn "fun." Very suprising & rewarding that 17 went uke. I would looooooove to see the next bit uploaded! Even if I'm the only one. *blows rasberry at lurkers* |
Reviewed By: Kalea2882 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update!! I have an idea, get Trunks to to planet Namek and wish for the Earth's Dragonballs back. Then wish for the Z fighters back on Earth. |
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