| "Blood Stone" Reviews/Comments [ 117 ] |
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Reviewed By: Faith Delani On: March 11, 2003 14:46 CST
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Fierce chapter! If I wasn't impressed before, I am now. Each character has their own quirks, but I'm interested about Heero's and Relena's. Why does he act like such an S.O.B? And why only now is she asserting herself? That's what has me curious. |
Reviewed By: Jace On: March 10, 2003 15:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let me review before I forget. Oh, my God chapter 4 was terrific. Never wanted to actually strangle characters (Duo,Hilde) before. It's funny how excited I get when I read this! |
Reviewed By: dragonlady sakura On: March 10, 2003 13:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The chapter has me speechless. Nah! Just have to say it was RRRRREALLY GOOD. |
Reviewed By: Sharon LeGrant On: March 09, 2003 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Must have more to survive! Curse you and your good writing! Now that's out of my system, lets talk about this chapter. A whole lotta issues going on. Can't comment on them all, but I will say this is as good as a soap opera! ^o~ |
Reviewed By: Kuno-baby On: March 09, 2003 20:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, this chapter, hell the whole story is filled with tension/drama. Is everything coming to a head for Relena? Something tells me she'd be smart to get the hell away from Heero and that clan before Odin dies. I'm just waitng anxiously for chapter 5 to see how the conflict ends with Heero. ^o^ |
Reviewed By: Macy Gray On: March 09, 2003 20:07 CST
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I'm too lazy to write a lot, so I'll say outstanding. |
Reviewed By: andy On: March 08, 2003 21:28 CST
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Two thumbs up! Even if Im not a movie critic. Still the writing is phenomenal. Since the topic of pairings has been brought up, I don't care who ends up with who, except Heero/Relena. Though I am a traditionalist usually. Hell, one pairing I'm extremely fond of is Lady Une and Trowa! And I've only read a small number of those. Une and Trowa, hmm? Subtle, I'm not. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Dark Deity On: March 08, 2003 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
first off.. i think all about this story is great, it's your story, you do what you want.. frankly, i'd rather have trowa and lena together, but the way your doing it works fine with me, cause you write so well. there hasn't been a stpry of yours i haven't enjoyed, and i don't much care how you pair people up, cause you give good reasons, and story behind the result.. i look foward to more... update this and demon seed soon!!!
Deity |
Reviewed By: Xellos-sama On: March 08, 2003 13:13 CST
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Well, if I thought chapter 3 was unbelievably excellant, you go and make chapter 4 even better. I can say your story isn't the least predictable and I never know what's going to happen next. A plus. Hate a story you can guess what's going on next from a mile away. Dying to guess where you're going with this next. |
Reviewed By: Mia On: March 07, 2003 22:01 CST
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Story still kicking ass! You were right about tensions rising in chapter 4. Seems everyone is hostile. Murder plots, back stabbing and crazied love triangles. My kind of story. |
Reviewed By: Gawl On: March 07, 2003 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enough about Heero and Relena, what about Noin/Milliardo/Mariemaia? Side note: what the heck kind of name is MILLIARDO? Yuck! Okay, I digress. Noin and "Millie" are in real danger from the evil, pyschotic duo of Dorothy and Mariemaia. |
Reviewed By: Mimi H. On: March 07, 2003 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alrighty, I have to say this was the best yet! And you've definitely kept this plot intruiging. One, the interaction Relena has with everyone shows how alone she really is. I feel for the girl. *sniff, sniff* Also Heero's hostility/attraction makes for good drama. The structuring of the story and subplot with Mariemaia makes for a helluva story. |
Reviewed By: Nabi-chan On: March 07, 2003 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Duo and Hilde deserve each other, they're both jerks! I'm sure the battle between Heero and Relena will be great. Can't wait to read the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: EM On: March 07, 2003 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go Relena! Don't take any crap from Heero. Besides Heero can't really hurt her since his dad's still alive. Though he might not care. Oh, addicting plot! |
Reviewed By: Dragonrose On: March 07, 2003 16:36 CST
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I am soooo glad that you're updating pretty quickly. The first thing I did when I got online was check this story. I can't believe Duo was being such a jerk. I still can't see why the bastard likes Hilde. I hate her guts! It's wonderful how you can make people feel so strongly about the characters in your fics. I did want to say that I think Mariemaia is the correct spelling - I got it off the Gundam Official website. I think Hilde is correct, too. Also, was Heero spying on Relena? If so, I bet he admits his feelings soon. Maybe a kiss instead of a bloody nose at the end of their fight? Although I'd be perfectly happy if he kissed her and then she punched him, the insensitive jerk! |
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