| "Don't Say You Love Me" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: Anna On: February 14, 2003 07:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, i story i can really relate too. I know exactly how Kagome felt. It's never a good thing to verbally attack your boss's son. lol...
Anna |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: February 14, 2003 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Originality! finally, something different> I love It! There hasn't been one with Inuyasha's father as a main character last time I checked. Inuyasha really needs to work on his girl skills though^_^ Have Inuyasha horribly stain something and force Kagome to clean it to perfection. That should get a pretty nice response! (grins evily)
I also like all of the facial expresions that you add. It makes imagining it a whole lot easier. Sessoumaru actually showing Rin affection openly... KAWAIIII!
'Hi, I'm the all-powerful signer of the pay checks, Fluffy the 1st... OOOOOOOOOkay. I like that name. You are good! (stands at atention and salutes) this is now one of my favorites! New chappie needed! Update! XOXO |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: February 14, 2003 22:13 CST
Comment/Review:
the test said... I'm Inuyasha!
(I just wrote a long praising review, I think that it just got deleted for some reason) |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: February 14, 2003 22:14 CST
Comment/Review:
no, wait the review's there! (sorry!) |
Reviewed By: Danie On: January 25, 2003 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god this is such a cool plot!! ^___^ And ah, about that Inuyasha character test......
I got Inuyasha!!!! ^________________________^
Heh heh, okay just had to say that but this is a very good plot and don't worry about the sur-names, they are better than enything *I* ever would have been able to come up with. Anyway, very good!!!! |
Reviewed By: jaylee On: January 21, 2003 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue writing on this story. |
Reviewed By: chenjen On: January 21, 2003 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARRRGGGGG!!!! update already i can't take it any longer! i kno,i kno i'm too impatiant but plz add a new chapter as soon you possibaly can...i'm waiting.... |
Reviewed By: Sora and Tai forever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 19:23 CST
Comment/Review:
kay i have like 3 of him 4 shippo 1 mirku and 2 sango 0 jaken 1 rin and3 kagome!hehe i have no fluffy but now i do!
Great chap!
*Kairi-chan* |
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune On: January 16, 2003 16:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Hia!
Ok, I REALLY REALLY LIKED this chappie and if you could PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE continue soon if you can that would be just PEACHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!....ok, maybe not peachy, but it would be great all the same! Thankx!
~Allie~ |
Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 10:53 CST
Comment/Review:
nice story^^ I like it!!!
update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: sammie On: January 06, 2003 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i really like the plot here! itz too cool! i cant wait till the next chapter!! plz write soon!
-sammie- |
Reviewed By: Sora and Tai forever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 01:11 CST
Comment/Review:
yeah keep it up!
*run around with chibi Inuyasha in left and Kagome in right hand!*
*Kairi-Chan* |
Reviewed By: Lady Hawk [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story so far please write more. On ff.net you would get more people looking at your fic so maybe you should send it there |
Reviewed By: Ahsayuni On: January 02, 2003 12:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Miroku frick...i love it!!
the last names are all original, ya dont see that real often. usually things like houshi, taiyoukai and stuff. thats usually what i do...
-.-;;
anyway keep going! |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan On: January 01, 2003 18:29 CST
Comment/Review:
this is a great chapter! i just want to comment on miroku's last name. o.o;; where did you think it up?
i really really really hope you update soon, i'm dying to know what happens next!
Mara |
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