| "Don't Say You Love Me" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: rain On: May 08, 2003 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's a really good fic.wow i really like the plot here!Please continue writing on this story.PleasecontinuePlease continue.{danceing and saying Please continue writing on this story.Please continue Please continue. |
Reviewed By: SilverFang [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOOOOONER PWEASE! i love dis wat does inu hav to say about the comment about his cousin lol inu+kag fluff plz |
Reviewed By: Inu bullet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 16:59 CST
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! how could you lose it? Aw, damn. If you forgot what you wrote, my offer still stands. you know how to reach me. |
Reviewed By: Inu bullet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 18:24 CST
Comment/Review:
P.S., the website also said that I way a lumber jack in a past life. |
Reviewed By: Inu bullet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 18:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I'm razorbld, but because of putting my E-mail address as Yahoo.net instead of Yahoo.com while signing up, I can't be razorbld anymore. but since I'm a rifle fanatic, the name Inu bullet popped into my head, and I like this name more. plus, bullet suits me more than bld. (which stands for blade in case you didn't figure it out already) razorbld is my Yahoo sign-in name. (I'm a guy, by the way)
Anyway, on with the review. Your writing is better than some primarily English speakers, so don't worry about it. Inuyasha, meet Mr. wall. ^_^ I can just picture Inuyasha going head-first into sheet-rock. Inuyasha: HaHaHa, BANG! Damnit! That would be hilarious. Inuyasha made little Rinny-chan cry, that bastard! (I can't stand seeing girls cry, either.) Inuyasha is in the 16/17 age group, so what the hell is he doing at a bar in the first place?! More! Me want more! (Man, aren't I content?) get that new chapter up soon, por favor. (Spanish for please. something that I picked up in between naps.) I love how the story is going. It should get interesting pretty soon...(screw evily, grins down right trecherously)
E-mail me if you like my new name, what do ya think? you know how to get the address. And when I said that I'm a gun nut, It's just a hobby. I'm not COMPLETELY insane...
Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: TopazAngel On: February 23, 2003 15:29 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it. Please keep going |
Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 18:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
im just going to ask you this once
would you please hurry up and update soon?
(as it is one of the more enjoyable stories i have ever read)
oh and good luck with the rest of the story |
Reviewed By: sammie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 17:46 CST
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i lovvvvve it! yay! plz update! i cant wait till da next chap! so update soon! *shakes pom-poms in the air* yay!!! |
Reviewed By: Demonchic_K On: February 19, 2003 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
work on the grammer, it gets annoying. PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Anna On: February 14, 2003 07:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, i story i can really relate too. I know exactly how Kagome felt. It's never a good thing to verbally attack your boss's son. lol...
Anna |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: February 14, 2003 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Originality! finally, something different> I love It! There hasn't been one with Inuyasha's father as a main character last time I checked. Inuyasha really needs to work on his girl skills though^_^ Have Inuyasha horribly stain something and force Kagome to clean it to perfection. That should get a pretty nice response! (grins evily)
I also like all of the facial expresions that you add. It makes imagining it a whole lot easier. Sessoumaru actually showing Rin affection openly... KAWAIIII!
'Hi, I'm the all-powerful signer of the pay checks, Fluffy the 1st... OOOOOOOOOkay. I like that name. You are good! (stands at atention and salutes) this is now one of my favorites! New chappie needed! Update! XOXO |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: February 14, 2003 22:13 CST
Comment/Review:
the test said... I'm Inuyasha!
(I just wrote a long praising review, I think that it just got deleted for some reason) |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: February 14, 2003 22:14 CST
Comment/Review:
no, wait the review's there! (sorry!) |
Reviewed By: Danie On: January 25, 2003 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god this is such a cool plot!! ^___^ And ah, about that Inuyasha character test......
I got Inuyasha!!!! ^________________________^
Heh heh, okay just had to say that but this is a very good plot and don't worry about the sur-names, they are better than enything *I* ever would have been able to come up with. Anyway, very good!!!! |
Reviewed By: jaylee On: January 21, 2003 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue writing on this story. |
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