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"Shattered Dreams, Broken Soul, Unbound Love" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ]
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 Reviewed By: mina tsukiyono  On: June 23, 2003 12:54 CDT
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Sorry I didn't review for chapter 9, I've been a little busy and didn't have time to read. This story keeps getting better! I stll LOVE your writing and please don't stop yet!!! Cliffhangers do suck, yes they do, very much, don't do it again. ^_^ lol Keep the chapters coming!!!
 Reviewed By: YukiKoori  On: June 22, 2003 15:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! This is really, really amazing story... very dramatic. Very shiny. (don't yell at me, shiny is just my word to descibe all the things i enjoy) I can't wait to read more, that was an evil, evil cliffhanger! Stuff like that can cause violence among the masses! So please, for the sake of your loyal readers (and your muses, except perhaps Wufei-chan) write more! We await with baited breath!
(Koori)
 Reviewed By: YukiKoori  On: June 22, 2003 15:41 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
^^ I really like this story (i'd use more articulate words but I can't spell... anything) Instead I'll have to use my (patented) word, SHINY! This is a really *shiny* ficcie!
 Reviewed By: Spryte  On: June 21, 2003 22:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
^-^' It's only been two days, don't worry. Anyway, ppl, hurry up and review. Poor Link & Sheik, ~huggles~
 Reviewed By: Spryte [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 18, 2003 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated! :P I read some of your ff8 fics too, but I didn't recognise the other series', and I still don't really understand Gundam Wing...

~sticks tongue out at Eoko~ I saw this fic first, on ff.net (which lately isn't so good, so many fics yet so few are good, and most of them copy eachother) so there. :P ~huggles Squall-sama~
 Reviewed By: Phoenix1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 18, 2003 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I know I already reviewed this chapter, but I had to throw in one more comment......
KICK HIS ASS LINK!!!!

Also, sorry about not reviewing on all of the chapters, This story is so AMAZING I didn't want to stop long enough to type!! SORRY!! ^-^
 Reviewed By: Phoenix1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 18, 2003 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Talk about a major turn-off!! An incounter like that could ALMOST turn a gay man straight!
I SAID ALMOST!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Phoenix1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 18, 2003 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Poor Link, I hope things get better for him.
 Reviewed By: Ine  On: June 18, 2003 07:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cliffhangers sure are a bitch! >O
*stares evilly at the bitchy cliffhanger*

You are killing me, you know that? My heart was pounding like mad while reading that chapter. I'm really, really glad you updated again, but... Poor Link and Sheik... Darn that Ganondorf! How dare he do such things to them?! >O
*would kill Ganondorf with her own hands, if she would ever get the chance for that*

I think this is one of the best chapters yet. Probably because of all the suspense, tension, angst and gore in it. I want to know what's going to happen next... =(

*goes to sit in a corner, holding her legs and rocking back and forth, trying to think of what could happen to Link and Sheik*
 Reviewed By: Phoenix1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 17, 2003 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Preach it Brother!!
Squall-Sama: Can I get an Amen?!?!

Open-Minded Readers: AMEN!!!!
 Reviewed By: Ine  On: June 17, 2003 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Reason behind my rating? Erm... this fic is great? Good enough as an answer? =O

I had been waiting such a long, long time for chapter 9, and I'm oh so happy that I could finally read it. This fic pulls me right into the story. I love it!
Their emotions, the way the characters interact with each other, the development of the story, the 'hot' parts ^______~ ... It's all so good! Big fan here (not the biggest, don't want to get killed by Eoko =O ), waiting for the next chapter to arrive. =D
 Reviewed By: Eoko  On: June 15, 2003 21:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! That chapter was great! It had a bit of Sheik/Link even if it was a very evil, and not real Sheik and then Ganondorf came and oh, I wanted to kill him... he is an evil nasty man! Although, not particularily tough to beat in the game... Anyways, I just have to read one more chapter, and then wiat for an update. I like this fic a lot, and I'm surprised the angstiness of it has not made me cry yet. *smiles* Go Squall-sama!
 Reviewed By: Eoko  On: June 14, 2003 22:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a crime! It is a crime that someone of your writing calibur in not getting paid loads of money... Hehehe. Is it wrong that I saw nothing wrong with the whole Linky/"Shadow creature" thing? I think it is. Bad Eoko! Bad! *smacks self over the head with a random object...* Hmm, Link needs help, but what can I do? Nothing! Oh no! *throws a bottled fairy and the Nayru's Love spell down into a hole which leads to a place called the Underworld* Just incase....
 Reviewed By: Eoko  On: June 14, 2003 19:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
*very sad and whimpery* That kind of angst always gets me. When they don't think they're worth anything... when they think no one cares... it's so sad! So very very sad!!! *cries* Bu-but, Link has t-to say him... R-ri-right? Please?
 Reviewed By: Eoko  On: June 14, 2003 01:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh poo! The chapter ended and I didn't even notice... It was so good I thought it was just going to go on and on... but I guess that is what the rest of the chapters are for eh? You know what. I could never read angst, never, never, ever... I would cry at the slightest sad bit... but I haven't cried yet. Nope, not at all. I think that after you write, read and are a part of enough angst you don't get effected by it as much. Anyways, yes this is sad, but I know they'll be together. They have to be. They love each other! *Is using huge arm gestures* Okay... I would read the next chapter tonight, but it's midnight and I have a 6 hour math review tomorrow!
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