| "A Royal Affair; The Saiyan Princes" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: A Royal Affair; The Saiyan Princes
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
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Reviewed By: leelee [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is a great story so far. i also love the T/P fanfic too. i really hope u finish soon.
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Reviewed By: Trunkslover16 On: February 17, 2003 13:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall this is a good fic, I'm a T/P fan myself though I also have my own T/? couple. E-Mail bobbijosmo59@yahho.com for more info. |
Reviewed By: SaiyanBeauty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHH! How could you?! That was an evil cliff hanger! Im loving this story so far. I love t&p fics. This is very intresting and I hope you add another chapter soon! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 20:23 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG!!! This is such a great story!!!
But then I realized that you guys are doing a thing where Pan has to decide between Trunks and Vegeta (or so I'm guessing). Erm...crap. I dun like that.
But it's okay. You won't lose me as a reader! ^_^
I just hope in the end it's Trunks...
Yes, I know, I'm a hopelessly lost T/P fan. Hey, what can ya do?
Hope everything works out, and things get a little clearer in the next chapter!! Can't wait 'till you crank it out!!!
~*Rizu-chan*~
PS: T/P forever!!! O_o;; Yes, I'm pathetic...I'll shut up now...
^_^;; |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 23:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Hellz yeah!!! If it's written by Shi-Saiyan, then it's definately a must-read!! And I don't know this other person who's co-writing it with ya, Shi-Saiyan, but she/he kicks ass too!!
Though, FloralBlackMoon rings a bell...*thinks*
Anywho, this fiction kicks ass!!! WOOT!!! Go T/P!!! T/P Forever!!! I really like it! ^_^
Hope to be co-writing a fiction with you soon, Shi-Saiyan!!!
~*Rizu-chan*~ |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2002 15:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Death Flower is a merging of you two authors? Hm, that's actually creative.
What'd I think?? Well, I love Trunks (that's an understatement) and I'm not exactly looking forward to what's coming. *sniff* But so far it's a creative start.
THIS is my FAV line, so far:
"...Tell me, Kakkorat’s spawn, when you were fucking Satan’s spawn, before you knew of the rituals did any instincts take over?”
*he he he* Satan's spawn. *LMAO!!* Vegeta and GOHAN are sparring partners?? That's a neat touch.
“Maybe you could make a similar machine?”
Go Videl!! Whoo hoo!! No THERE's a smart idea! ;)
“It has to involve blood if this is a ritual.”
*blinks* You mean the Saiyan Mating/Claiming ritual IS more than just getting bitten on the neck and drawing blood?? *heh* You got me interested.
So just who ARE the Saiyan Princes?? o.O
Keep it up, it's great so far! ^_~
PS Some guys (and Trunks especially!!) are SO cute when they say "Good morning" like THAT! ;) |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2002 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good start to a good fic |
