| "Shatterglass" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: EphemeralFantasy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 04:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading your love story!!! i came together very nicely! **Constructive Criticism** there were only a few typos I found, I'd have to go over it again to find direct locations if you'd like me to. but I'd like to thank you for sending me the link to your work it was very engaging!!! keep up the great work! I hope to see more from you in the future!
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Title: shatterglass
Reviewed By: Katlien Maxwell On: May 19, 2004 05:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic it brings out a lot of heero that i was waiting for someone to write about. I LOVE IT!! P.S.i would love it if you wrote more fics about heero and Duo. please!!!
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Reviewed By: Akennea On: September 29, 2003 16:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was good. Very good.
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Reviewed By: mitsubachi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! this was a great fic!! And it was my first Gundam too. I missed all those times the series was shown on TV so now I'm trying to get into it. heh heh... what a way to start! I loved this story! |
Reviewed By: Lita On: February 15, 2003 22:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm the 36th review! this was really good! |
Reviewed By: Arithkenshin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 05:25 CST
Comment/Review:
i cant believe i am giving into peer pressure like this
This is your 35th review...just post the damn chapter PLEASE!!! |
Reviewed By: O.O On: December 22, 2002 02:44 CST
Comment/Review:
brill darlin, totally brill! |
Reviewed By: sugar*gurl On: December 22, 2002 02:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome... 100% awesome!!!
:D :D |
Reviewed By: Medea Dracena [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2002 18:39 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm not the 35th reviewer *pouts* I broke my record. But two times isn't half bad, dontcha think? Would it be demanding of me to say 'MORE! NOW DAMMIT!' *grins* I can't wait for the next chapter. Actually, I think I'm going to hate the next chapter because then it'll be the end ;~;
Ja ne!
Medz-chan =^.^= |
Reviewed By: Night On: December 19, 2002 15:41 CST
Comment/Review:
finally some nice bedroom action: great and now I hope they'll live happy ever after caus' Heero must be happy now!!! Good job! |
Reviewed By: Nao On: December 19, 2002 12:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay girl... gimme me more.... this was getting funny towards chapter 5 or 6 about sex-ed... I would like to know what is going to happen... come on tell me tell me!!!! Poor Heero.. I just want to hold him and make him cry....:( I don't know how many reviews you need now.. but this is one more then what you had....:D |
Reviewed By: Medea Dracena [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 04:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Yanno, I'm starting to feel real special. You ask for 23 rviews, I was your 23rd reviewer. You ask for 29 reviews, I'm your 29th reviewer. I should get some sort of award for being so lucky.
ANYWAY! ^.^ That chapter was much lighter than the rest of the story. Shorter, but that's ok because you're providing us with a lemon next chapter *dances around*
But poor Heero. Not knowing anything about sex. Or babies even. But he'll find out soon. If not the babies part by hands-on experience then definately the sex part!
*skips of singing* 2x1 lemon! 2x1 lemon!
Ja ne!
Medz-chan =^.^= |
Reviewed By: Skye On: December 17, 2002 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still like it, but there were a lot of spelling mistakes at the beginning of one of the recent chapters that ruined its flow. Please continue posting quickly. |
Reviewed By: sapphire On: December 17, 2002 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i quite like this |
Reviewed By: Medea Dracena [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 15:57 CST
Comment/Review:
WAH! I come back from my parent-imposed exile from the net and there's three new chapters of this wonderful story to greet me! You said you needed 23 reviews to get chapter 7, so here I am! The 23rd reviewer! And if I'm not, then I was when I started writing this ^.^;
The end of chapter 6 was my favourite, the very last line about Duo saying how he was going to try and make Heero fall in love with him. So dramatic and... well, depressing comes to mind as well. But I still love it and I love your writing style. A few typos here and there but it's very polished.
See! See! I reviewed! Now what about capter 7 =3
Ja ne!
Medz-chan =^.^= |
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