| "Koware na Hato" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: Pandapants182 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ne? I don't get any of the smart reviewers remarks but htat's okaaaay. I love this sotry! ^^ Hope you update it again really really really soon! Oh poor Ryou-kun... oh well. Don't care, it's a fanfic. Nya! |
Reviewed By: Yuki-chan On: January 08, 2003 05:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Whoa, didn't expect THAT for the spirit transfer. But still....ARGH! Poor Ryou. Everything is happening to him, from dying to rape. He has one hell of a life does he? And Bakura-kun. Baka. He should try to tell Ryou some reassuring words atleast before the whole process!!!! Maybe, if he care so much about Ryou, he can mutter those three words..... Anyway, keep the story up!!! It's getting good! ^____________^ |
Reviewed By: Yami Tsuki Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 00:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONTINUE!!!!! AIYA!!! YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE LEFT IT THERE! *dies* ehehe... I like it so far! Wow... nice turn out. I'm more of a LIME fan... not really LEMON... But please do continue! |
Reviewed By: Lady Starisa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story but I'm new, so...help me out will you? Oh and will there be a Yami/Yugi romance? It would cool...because then both Bakura and Yami could team up and remember more about their past! Great story! |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: January 06, 2003 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOOOOOOL!!!! PLEASE BRING MORE!!!! PLEASE! Lemony freshness up ahead! I don't want to miss it! ^_^ Ryou & Bakura are sooo sugoi!!!!! I LOVE this fic! Really! ^_^ Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Moosenogger On: January 04, 2003 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I WUV this story! Don't doubt yourself, you're a great writer. Please update this soon, I want to find out what happens to poor Ryou. DON'T KEEP ME IN SUSPENSE!! Oh yeah, BTW, I think your lemons are fine. ^_____^ |
Reviewed By: suzaku priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 17:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Why? Why leave us there? You are mean! Come on and update soon! Or the insane fox duelist here will cry! that or I might have to summon Suzaku to hurt you! |
Reviewed By: KillerOfMiaka@37.com On: January 04, 2003 09:05 CST
Comment/Review:
EVIL! That is what you are if yo do not update this soon. Very interesting storyline, nothing I've ever seen before in fan fics (and reading them is about all I DO with my time) Update soon ! |
Reviewed By: malikzgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww.....poor ryou........
i hope nothing happens to him....:( |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 20:51 CST
Comment/Review:
not bad. poor ryou-chan... wasn't yami bakura's previous life supposed to be in eygpt instead of japan? ne wayz, i like it, now on with the lemon! |
Reviewed By: Saphirerose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Squall-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 15:30 CST
Comment/Review:
its so sad... i was kinda confused what had happened with this part though--it was almost like it didn't belong with the other parts, was there something i was missing? |
Reviewed By: Yami-Jen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 14:23 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this story! Please continue soon! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Squall-sama On: December 28, 2002 22:13 CST
Comment/Review:
*whimpers* more please?
i've never read a Yu-gi-oh fanfic this great before--and there's hardly any mistakes in it!! (spelling-wise) more soon i hope!? |
Reviewed By: Tipola [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 05:45 CST
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you better write more but do try and make a happy ending poor little guy *snifff sniff* |
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