| "Koware na Hato" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: Yami Tsuki Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 00:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONTINUE!!!!! AIYA!!! YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE LEFT IT THERE! *dies* ehehe... I like it so far! Wow... nice turn out. I'm more of a LIME fan... not really LEMON... But please do continue! |
Reviewed By: Lady Starisa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story but I'm new, so...help me out will you? Oh and will there be a Yami/Yugi romance? It would cool...because then both Bakura and Yami could team up and remember more about their past! Great story! |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: January 06, 2003 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOOOOOOL!!!! PLEASE BRING MORE!!!! PLEASE! Lemony freshness up ahead! I don't want to miss it! ^_^ Ryou & Bakura are sooo sugoi!!!!! I LOVE this fic! Really! ^_^ Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Moosenogger On: January 04, 2003 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I WUV this story! Don't doubt yourself, you're a great writer. Please update this soon, I want to find out what happens to poor Ryou. DON'T KEEP ME IN SUSPENSE!! Oh yeah, BTW, I think your lemons are fine. ^_____^ |
Reviewed By: suzaku priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 17:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Why? Why leave us there? You are mean! Come on and update soon! Or the insane fox duelist here will cry! that or I might have to summon Suzaku to hurt you! |
Reviewed By: KillerOfMiaka@37.com On: January 04, 2003 09:05 CST
Comment/Review:
EVIL! That is what you are if yo do not update this soon. Very interesting storyline, nothing I've ever seen before in fan fics (and reading them is about all I DO with my time) Update soon ! |
Reviewed By: malikzgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww.....poor ryou........
i hope nothing happens to him....:( |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 20:51 CST
Comment/Review:
not bad. poor ryou-chan... wasn't yami bakura's previous life supposed to be in eygpt instead of japan? ne wayz, i like it, now on with the lemon! |
Reviewed By: Saphirerose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Squall-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 15:30 CST
Comment/Review:
its so sad... i was kinda confused what had happened with this part though--it was almost like it didn't belong with the other parts, was there something i was missing? |
Reviewed By: Yami-Jen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 14:23 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this story! Please continue soon! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Squall-sama On: December 28, 2002 22:13 CST
Comment/Review:
*whimpers* more please?
i've never read a Yu-gi-oh fanfic this great before--and there's hardly any mistakes in it!! (spelling-wise) more soon i hope!? |
Reviewed By: Tipola [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 05:45 CST
Comment/Review:
you better write more but do try and make a happy ending poor little guy *snifff sniff* |
Reviewed By: darkness_follows [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 00:55 CST
Comment/Review:
NO, please dont make poor Ryou-chan die! TAKE PITY!!! |
Reviewed By: Yami Tsuki Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now I really! REALLY like this fic! Whoa... I mean seriously... It's so realistic! I absoulutely love it! Mayness... I can get on ff.net though... V____V stupid AOL connections... wellz PLEASE CONTINUE SOON! Onegai! |
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