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Reviewed By: la la On: September 13, 2004 19:50 EDT
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you have no idea how good you are. you had drawned me in on the first few chaps. please continue to write.i love it.
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 14:27 EDT
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Bwahahaha, so evil. i wish it were longer though! please update soon, you are doing so much better!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: baby snake On: September 12, 2004 21:59 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please lease please update! I want to know whats happening with K and V!
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Reviewed By: alexandrea romanzesco On: September 12, 2004 19:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good chapter. i like that you let us see inside zucchini's head. but i still don't like her, she's too mousey. i wanna see if she'll go ahead andcheat on vegeta with her love. i think women should be allowed to take up concubines too. and i wanna know what's gonna happen between vegeta and evil goku. goku being sick and twisted is always hot..... can't wat till the next chapter `alex~
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Title: d..d...d..d..d..damn!!!!
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: September 12, 2004 14:05 EDT
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Wow. I think i like Zuchini. she realy is so cool.
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Title: slave
Reviewed By: mlf On: September 07, 2004 17:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like the way you let us look into her mind and see all of her pain.i like the way vegeta is thinking to ...you just take to long getting these chapters out...please update soon....maria...i really don't want them getting married but i can understand why..and whats to become of bulma and her baby....
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Reviewed By: ivy rose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 14:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was totally awesome, I have a whole new respect for zucchini. Hoping to see more bulma in the next posting. You rock.
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Reviewed By: Demi Adres On: September 05, 2004 19:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad at all...I like where you're going with this! Kakarots character is especially intriging!
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Reviewed By: Kethry(notloged in) On: September 05, 2004 16:04 EDT
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First off let me say I just found this fic. Still being alittle new to MM.org. I really like it so far. **smirks** but then I am a fan of BDsm. A few comments. Vegeta is a bastard and I like it that way. True he has feellings deep down but he rarly if ever lets them out or even relizes they are there. And OMG the mind F*** he dose on her is just wonderful. She is really starting to NEED him isn't she. I can not wait untill he has her in his grip once more. Something else **grabs her** If you kill Bardock I will scream! The sexyist saiyan there ever was, you so can not let him get killed. **let her go and clears her throat** sorry about that. I must say I like the evil kackorrot. ^.^ very nice. are you going to have V and K go at it?? Now there is a chance for real damage!! **Wiggles eyebrows** Ok I am twisted I know but no more upsets me. Just do not kill Bardock...... in fact I would like to see him get laid. **rasies hand** I will offer myself for the duty but well .... I am not in the story.. **pouts** but please keep him alive at the very lest. **Growls** you will not let Freeza get his slimy lizard claw on the heir will you, that would sooooo suck. Well I have ranted enough. Wind to your wings, Kethry MoonDragon horselady11977@yahoo.com
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Title: i got it now...
Reviewed By: alexandrea romanzesco On: August 28, 2004 03:33 EDT
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i think i've got it know, the whole 'bulma hearing voices' thing. you've left a lotta clues. not obviuos, i got this conclusion after re-reading every thing . if i'm right then i am sooo doing the happy dance! ~alex~
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Reviewed By: Furi Iki On: August 27, 2004 19:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent job on writing this fic!! Your's is the only story I keep coming back for. I have a question: Is Bulma going to meet Goku? I certainly hope so! He's so damn sexy in this fic... and in Dark Majik. Well, keep up the good work and I hope your health improves!!! Furi Iki
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Title: slave
Reviewed By: kriss On: August 16, 2004 17:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the new chapter! Can't wait to see how everything ties together. Glad your feeling better!
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Title: Slave
Reviewed By: Vegetas Linda-lou On: August 11, 2004 16:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY!!! Please write more!! I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: ani_girl7789 On: August 04, 2004 21:24 EDT
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man!!! i want to know what happens!!!! plz update ASAP!!!
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Reviewed By: Purple_Yaten On: August 03, 2004 23:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I just recently read all of the chapters so far, so I decided to lump my opinion on the latest one... I love this story! You took an overused storyline (Vegeta takes Bulma as his love-slave) and turned it into something completely original! Instead of Vegeta turning into a mushy "omgIloveyousomuch" you kept him in character. Also, another great thing is that you're not taking rape lightly. Unlike some authors, you don't make rape into some sort of "Wellll... maybe AFTER she's raped she's like 'I do love him!' and stuff!" and portray it realisticly. There is a shame afterwards for most people, not some sort of "Wow! What a hotty!" type of feeling. Your writing style is very readable, though there a few inconsistancies here and there (calling a character another name or maybe a few grammatical errors) but nothing that stands out a lot. Anyway, I'm going to be patiently waiting for an update! ~PY
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