| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: AliceGlunt On: April 27, 2011 08:34 EDT
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i love this so much!!! i just wish you'd update more, but when you do, I stop everything and read it. keep up the good work. i can't wait to see how it ends!!! |
Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2011 06:30 EDT
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Yep, against my better judgement I decided to read it over here, too. Dammit. Now I can't stop squeezing my ass cheeks. To think that Bulma had to endure all of that...at FULL GRAVITY!!! OUCH!!! |
Reviewed By: Zakirya On: April 27, 2011 04:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I am shocked and pissed at Vegeta and I can't wait until Bulma gets the fuck out of there! Fucking bastard! Great writing! |
Title: Chillz!
Reviewed By: Zakirya On: April 10, 2011 14:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I've read this fic on Fanfiction and imagine my surprise to see it on this site! If that's the case, fanfiction is gonna lose alot of customers and authors! U rule and this story is so powerful and emotional! I love it! 4rm da blk chick$$$ |
Reviewed By: JeremySergioIrvin On: March 10, 2011 22:57 EST
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Please finish this! You have tobecause you said!! I will definitely will be waiting. Until next time Vegeta Goddess |
Reviewed By: JeremySergioIrvin On: March 10, 2011 06:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You already know how much I love your writing but this time I wanted to say something else. You're a teacher?! You must be one hell of a teacher!! You write awesome fanfics for christs sake! |
Title: Wow
Reviewed By: JeremySergioIrvin On: March 08, 2011 22:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this for quite some time and I absolutely cannot get enough of it. Your storyline is solid and I throughly enjoy reading it. I'm glad to say I have found no disappointments while reading this unique story. I was getting tired of regular fairy tale fics and this definitely takes the cake for best one I have read in a while. Also, I don't want to be weird saying this but you are one of the best writers of lemon scenes I have ever read. The scenes are expressed so greatly that I find every detail highlighting itself in my brain. The incest scene was uncomfortable at first but I can't even come close to complaining because it was very realistically written. Thank you for letting me enjoy writing once again. -jeremy |
Reviewed By: scarredbride [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2011 23:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I guess I'm a hard critic being an 'Oldies but Goldie" type of angst fanfic writer to Inuyasha. Been 5+ years so kind of got pushed out by newcomers(which fresh blood is always great!) Lately, I was bored so got DBZ'd by my 10 year old, yet NickToons cuts out too much or reruns! ^.^ Anyway, I'm enjoying this very much. Ch.33 & still reading! BTW, I'm hoping you've been feeling better. I know the feeling of life intruding in horrible ways when passionate in writing plus fans who thirst for more. As I guess a side note: Writing fanfics/poetry/ect. in this style is actually a therapy method. Worked magic and I'm not the greatest author but it helped hone my skills. If you ever read anything I wrote or helped write years ago I was in a rough point but oddly since then my life changed & sadly I lost my momentum when getting started on a real book that I wanted to publish. Sometimes our best creativity comes from real life whether good or bad. Hope to see more from you & time for me to finish reading! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Chuchi On: December 10, 2010 04:25 EST
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please publish a new chapter for xmas :D I |
Reviewed By: hachii On: November 07, 2010 00:24 EDT
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you never cease to amaze me. i'm going to be half sad and half excited when this is over, but until then!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Zuko On: October 31, 2010 19:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't let us wait another 5 months pleeassee...X_X I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER...I'M ADDICTED!!xoxo
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Reviewed By: Laira On: October 28, 2010 16:43 EDT
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I'm so glad you want to finsih this *hugs* I love you and I hope you have a good week :D Greetings from Germany
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Reviewed By: Firu On: October 28, 2010 16:40 EDT
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woooahh thank you so much for ending this fic
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2010 00:44 EDT
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mmmm I love you. I meant to review for this the second you put the new chapter on but I got busy :) its wonderful... once you started updating again I went through and re-read the story :) I missed it!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Caslite [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2010 21:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be the best most twisted V/b fic i have ever read. i began reading this story on fanfic about two days ago, but then i realized all the lemony goodness was taken out so i went over to mediaminer and was happy to find it here. through out the first few chapters i couldn't help but think i have read this before, but your is soo much better that i figure they got the idea from your story. even Princess Zuchinis name. anyway love the fic and please dont take years to get the next chapter done. :)
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