| "Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 821 ] |
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Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 03:58 EST
Comment/Review:
keep going ^_^ great so far |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 02:11 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Write more, dammit, write more!! And MAYbe I'll leave a longer review next time..... ;)
Chapter 9 lemon was .... well, Vegeta said it best. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: ::bao On: January 08, 2003 00:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::WOW! dis story is great! its not deh average,
'bulma is vegeta's slave. after a week or so, vegeta turns soft a lil and dey bound...'....
heh...its great.. funny and surprisingly gets you addicted....good work..and plz update soon!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Faye89 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 22:24 EST
Comment/Review:
OOOOOH!!!! This is getting too good, please review ASAP!All I can say is you have some real talent when it comes to creativity. |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 15:42 EST
Comment/Review:
I like the way this story is going, please update soon |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 11:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very forgetful....I meant to review, forgive me!! Lol, anyway, I love the story, it was on FFN wasn't it? Well, got things to do, people to bug,
Ja~
*Crazy One* |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 10:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really think this is a cool story. Keep writing. Princess Zuchuinni? Did you really have to give her the name of a vegitable? Or is it some kind of joke, like Veggie and Zuchinni sittin' in a tree... Sorry, this is supposed to be a B/V fic and I think I've been blabbing to much so, gotta go, bye! |
Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 21:54 EST
Comment/Review:
Wow!!! The entire fic is wonderful!! I love all of it. Can't wait for you to finish. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 17:50 EST
Comment/Review:
This is getting sooo interesting. I think I know who He is. I'm not so sure about the spy, but I think I have an idea... |
Reviewed By: Lisa-chan On: January 01, 2003 14:55 EST
Comment/Review:
he he he hahah ehehehehee haheh eheheheheehe PRINCESS ZUCCHINI!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHHE HE HE HE HHEHAHA HEH EH HAHAHAHAH HE HEH HE HEHHEH HAHAHA HEHEH HEHEEH HAH H THAT IS THE FUNNIEST THING
*sigh* hope you update soon! lol...ZUCHINI! HE HE HEH AHAHA |
Reviewed By: Buffyirl5009 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 01:47 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Yippie! ^_^ Yet another fanfic I can read that is actually Very good. OH YAY! ^_^ PLease continue...Or I'll die!!!! LOl!I am loving this, every single bit of it!OMG Vegeta getting married...Oh this is good...write more soon okay! Please!
Love,Peace,and Harmony,
~Buffygirl~ |
Reviewed By: Kalea2882 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 01:24 EST
Comment/Review:
Awsome! Update Soon!! |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2003 22:28 EST
Comment/Review:
There is no such a thing as a pointless lemon, your lemons are soooooo lemony and bondage next would add a nice change and some pointless plot for more great lemon. |
Reviewed By: Buffyirl5009 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 21:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EWWWWWWW Vegeta is getting fisty..I like that. Anyways this is a relly good fanfic..it would get a whole lot of more reviews if you put some twisted stuff in there. Like Bulma chewing Vegeta out becasue she catches him sleeping with another whore. ** wink wink** Or she thinks she did...**gasp** OHHHHH!!!! ok anyways this is really good! Keep it up i am druling over to read the next chapter. If you need any idea's please write to me at LilSasami2005@aol.com
Peace out
~Buffygirl~ |
Reviewed By: satan's seraph... On: December 29, 2002 19:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^ ^;;; I, as I've mentioned, like this fic, but I was wondering if you could..... *sighs* once again help me out. Since there're all these bitchy people on ff.net I want to put my fics on a new site, but I..... don't know of any, and I dunno how to sign up on this one- everytime I try it..... gives me a person that already exists.... *sweatdrops* I think it just doesn't like me..... but, anyway- I love this fic, and I really think it's heading in a good direction!!! Keep up the great work!! *v* |
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