| "I'll Have Lemonade, Please" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! Just what I needed: an old favorite. I still don't get the joke about speaking another language, but I think I finally understand the insurance scam this time around. What I don't get is what Kikyou would care about money (even that much money) and how that was supposed to help Naraku find the Shikon no Tama. |
Reviewed By: miyo On: February 15, 2003 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was vary kickass please write the sequel &_& |
Reviewed By: Anna (nu_chan@hotmail.com) On: February 10, 2003 20:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay, I know it took me a long time, but I finally got to read this story. I read it about two weeks ago at Iridescent Dreams, but I couln't leave a review there, so... here it is! I love this story, so much. You have no idea. It is just so great. Great plot, great characterization, just great writing. You're so awesome! ^_^ I'll be reading Lemonade Too, as soon as I get some free time, and I seem to remember you mentioning a 'end of series fic'? I can't wait for that! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen On: February 13, 2003 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another monster from the I.D.! I also read this one a long time ago on Iridescent Dreams, and I'd like to say that it's one of the ones I keep coming back to.
This version of Inuyasha seems a lot more collected than the canon one, but I could see how it could be him -- he's supposed to be older, more like a human just south of thirty than a human at 16 or 17 like in the anime/manga. It's hard to picture Kagome as being from Wisconsin, but this older version of Shippo makes so much sense! Oh and Kaede's, "Did I mention he's an idiot?"
Overall -- I found it funny and insightful. |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 20:42 CST
Comment/Review:
so when's this supposed sequel coming out, hn?
Mara |
Reviewed By: Mariam On: January 22, 2003 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't beleive it is she pregnant?!?!?!?!?!?! i hope you tell us soon, i think he should have told her that she would be pregnant well any way i looooooved it!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Rin On: January 22, 2003 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an absolutely excellent read! It was very intelligent in every aspect; from the writing style to the lemony goodness! ^_^ These are the kind of fanfics I love to read! I'm looking forward to some more great work from you! |
Reviewed By: Lo On: January 22, 2003 09:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent fic, your writing talent astounds me! Great plot and very detailed, if only all fanfics were this good. Nice work. |
Reviewed By: Christina On: January 20, 2003 09:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're plot is very interesting and it seems you put a lot of work to get this story as it is. This is one of the very few stories I enjoyed to the fullest and I commend you on your efforts. There were no confusion when I read this, as there is in many stories out there. Though the story is exceptional, I would like to add that it might make more sence if you made it clearer how demons are still living in the modern time. That's the only thing I think that could be changed, but the story is still amazing without that detail. Please keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: crystal luver On: January 19, 2003 15:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked |
Reviewed By: Diane On: January 18, 2003 00:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED this fic. I just decided to try Inu-Yasha fics today & this is 1 of the first I've read but I liked it the best of the ones I did read, I read all 6 chapters in almost 1 sitting & can hardly wait for the sequel. More soon please. |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 22:49 CST
Comment/Review:
waaah i want a sequel!!! when will you post the first chapter?!
Mara |
Reviewed By: Black Angel--AD On: January 13, 2003 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This fic is freaking perfect!! Please write the sequel soon!! It is going to kick ass!! Love the fic! |
Reviewed By: Hoyin On: January 13, 2003 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHH~ this was a lovely fic!!! write more fics like this! |
Reviewed By: hershey On: January 07, 2003 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the BEST fanfic i have ever read!! U definitely HAVE to do a sequel! Nicely described, and original, and GOOD, GOOD, and did i mention GOOD!! |
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