| "In the most unlikely of places" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ragna01 On: February 15, 2003 14:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was really good!!!!Please update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: EvenStar On: February 10, 2003 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
let me just say, I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!! so original, i have been waiting for someone to write a fic like this. This is really good, it's got suspense.. a little angst and i love it! poor lil yugi.. anyway keep writing!! i can't wait til the next chappie, perhaps a little longer maybe?? please? (::big chibi eyes::) ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 20:11 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a depressing chapter. I hope the next one is a little happier. What's in the jars in Pegasus' room? And how did the one empty one fill up? I hope you post another chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: EvenStar On: February 12, 2003 21:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahh!!!!! this is soooo gooood !!!!! how interesting... wonder what's in those jars.. evil pegasus .... hope u have more yugi/yami fluff ;)
otherwise very good!!!! THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!!!!!!! many many thanx |
Reviewed By: Kayla On: February 06, 2003 21:12 CST
Comment/Review:
I hope you write more to this, I really like it! |
Reviewed By: Kayla On: February 01, 2003 00:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey I think this is great! I hope you get more out. |
Reviewed By: nateDOG!!!! [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 03:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cmon Right more! this is a good story! |
Reviewed By: kireichan On: January 04, 2003 00:02 CST
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this looks really interesting! I can't wait till the next chapter comes out! |
Reviewed By: Megami Riley On: December 28, 2002 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*looks around* where is the rest of the fic? Are you going to update it anytime soon? Ya left it at a cliff hanger and I'm dying to know what happens next. |
Reviewed By: EvenStar On: December 24, 2002 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic. lots of suspense.. just the way i like it! keep writing great fic, please update soon!!!!!! i love this story!!! maybe longer chappie next time??? (:: big chibi eyes::) |
Reviewed By: Yami Girl On: December 18, 2002 12:15 CST
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I relly, really like it. When are you going to have the next chapter? |
Reviewed By: Kirikou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 10:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey this sounds very interesting, please mail me when you write more!
Greetz Kiri-chan |
Reviewed By: Dark_Fox On: December 13, 2002 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O man. i love this story. cant wait to read next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: December 13, 2002 18:50 CST
Comment/Review:
The first couple of chapters were a little confusing, but hopefully the rest of the story will help clear that up. It sounds like an interesting premise for a story. Please post more soon. |
Reviewed By: Alyssa On: December 17, 2002 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Job Melissa but I dont know too much about Yugi but it looks like it will be good! Have fun writing it and let me know when the next chapter arrives! |
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