| "Enemies, or?" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lethanon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 18:05 CST
Comment/Review:
LMFAO! Has Noin gone home?? hehehe/ oh, this fic is funky (in a good way!) I love it...can u please email me when u update? Sansillion@hotmail.com that would be great. kiitos! |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat On: February 20, 2003 23:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Great story. Absolutely hilarious! I love it. Write more!!!!! |
Reviewed By: fanny On: February 09, 2003 08:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really fun to read, i just cant wait for the next part(wink, wink) keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 17:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh... no wonder his names is like that. I watched too much bad dubbed ones. -_-
-_- Why did you stop there? It was really getting cute ^-^ poor Dorothy... -_- I like the last chapter too.
Please keep sending them!!! |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey! That was good for now.
The style gets a 10 because it goes along. Really :) That was a good story with a flow or something like that.
A 9 for spelling, the grammar HAS got better. I think the name is spelled "Tuberov" but I might be wrong -_-
A 9 for originality, you're right that it's almost like "Enemies or Lovers" and the other "Holiday from hell", but I think your plot is getting more original :) Keep it up!
Please continue! It is really getting good. No lying and I'm really getting curious about what's going to happen next. So please keep it up!!! |
Reviewed By: Kat1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAH this is getting good. Hmm i cant wait for you post again. HURRY! |
Reviewed By: Joey (yes i am a girl) On: January 07, 2003 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really fun and interesting, i like to see them arguing back and forth.I'm also looking foward to the circus, and what the winner will get in the bet they made about the 'wonderous circus man'. PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: claire On: January 05, 2003 23:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such an interesting story! PLEASE continue. Would very much like to know what exactly caused the animosity between our boys and how they're gonna deal with it... eventually, I hope :-) |
Reviewed By: mei_akutenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 21:36 CST
Comment/Review:
I pitty Noin...
Great fic so far, I'm looking foward to the circus, and what the winner will get in the bet they made about the 'wonderous circus man'.
I would rate it... but I'm not very good at that... I like it though... |
Reviewed By: kat On: June 06, 2003 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, I just started reading it today and couldnt stop. I really hope you add on soon. |
Reviewed By: CinC On: December 14, 2002 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's fun, I like to see them arguing back and forth.
I can't wait to see what would happen when they are in the same class. |
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