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"Pressure" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ]
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 Reviewed By: jainaxshadows [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 08, 2008 23:26 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hi. I have been a longtime fan of yours and I absolutely love Pressure! I was wondering if you could possibly post Distant Memories. It was the first fic of yours that I read and I adored it, but I can't find it anywhere! If you could post it that would be great. I always liked the part of this story where Nyoko got what was coming to her at Mokuba's birthday. Great fic!
 Reviewed By: silverdragon_0120  On: August 19, 2003 05:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is a great fic! I love Seto!!! I love Seto/Yami/Yugi yaoi lemon fics!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! They're just so PERFECT for each other! I can't help it!
 Reviewed By: AuroraDragonKaya [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 08, 2003 15:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Gomen Nasai!!! You are DigiPuppy!1! I'm so sorry!!! ^^' Eee!!! Yay!!!! I've been waiting and looking all over!!! I LOVE your fics!!! ^-^ **cries happily**
 Reviewed By: AuroraDragonKaya [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 08, 2003 15:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Wasn't this DigiPuppy's fic...?

Teikimon- **eyes narrow** "Yes, it was."

Hey, I may wanna read this again, but you shouldn't take other people's fics! Especially ones this good! **glares**
 Reviewed By: ruby queen of evil [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 13, 2003 13:27 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ruby: i like the evil gf...
Yami Ruby: and aznu bashing yay!
Ruby: (snorts) htat that ho.... goddess dammed freindship rants..
Yami Ruby : Yami rants too...heart of the crads....and seto rants about power...
Ruby: anyway i really enojy u as a writer..
 Reviewed By: Makos Queen [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 30, 2002 23:22 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really LOVE this fanfic. Well written, and quite entertaining. I will add you as a favorite author. Keep up the great work!
 Reviewed By: mtlxiaoangel [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 30, 2002 18:42 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Holy crap that this is a GOOD FIC! I've never really enjoyed Seto/Yami/Yugi ones until I've read this one. Even though it's NC-17, I'm loving it! Continue!!
 Reviewed By: Makos Queen [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 30, 2002 03:54 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story! I first came across it at a Yahoo Group called Yugioh Yaoi. I think you only have the 1st 4 chapters listed there. I wept because there wasn't anymore. Then someone suggested that I check here -- and once again I have found it! I am a fan for life!

-- Mako's Queen
 Reviewed By: demonruri  On: December 30, 2002 00:37 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like your story with the pairing, of Seto, Yami and Yugi. Seto Kaiba is my favorite character. Could you write more storie with these pairings, becasue i have look at many stories on MM and nothing are actually worth even reading. Also they are too childish, but you really got a good working threesome, lemon scenes and great charaterzarions. So please write more!
 Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 18, 2002 00:48 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great characterizations, hot lemon scenes,and you made the threesom believable. Looking forward to a sequel.
 Reviewed By: Naturi [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 16, 2002 13:13 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Kick ass story!!! Poor Seto...he's one of my fave characters, despite how cold and emotionless he may seem. I'm glad he got with Yami/Yugi....he needed a little innocence and Egyptian in his life, lol!!! Congrats, you are now one of my fave authors!!
 Reviewed By: Ishida Takeru [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 14, 2002 22:40 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
It was good. I just have a problem seeing Seto so..um..submissive. ^_^
 Reviewed By: Ishida Takeru [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 14, 2002 22:40 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
It was good. I just have a problem seeing Seto so..um..submissive. ^_^
 Reviewed By: Dark_Fox  On: December 14, 2002 18:46 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Cool ness. i realy like ur story. and i think i am gooing to put it on my favorite list.
 Reviewed By: Terendel [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 08, 2003 19:34 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the plot to this and how you wrote Kaiba. The story had me hooked from start to finish. The lemon scenes were very nice.

My one complaint is with your spelling and word usage. For example, it's "throes of passion" not "throws of passion." There were many instances throughout of the wrong word, and this did detract from my overall enjoyment.

That said, I am going to read New Beginnings. And are there any more in this series?
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