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| "Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Eloy Brightdreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 14:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a bad start! I've always liked the couple of Ryss and Raven. I'd like to see where you go with this!
You've got a good writing style, but you probably should have a betareader go over your work... there were a few spelling errors that a spell-check wouldn't catch. (For example, you had Ryss spelled as Reese in one line.) | Reviewed By: no name/nick On: January 03, 2003 05:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is the start of a really great story.
I like lemons alot.^_^
keep on writing.:) ^_^ | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] |
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