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"Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ]
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 Reviewed By: LadyRedComet  On: June 17, 2003 16:14 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Neat start, cool plot, etc. I could go on and on. I've never read much Ryss/Raven stuff, but this story's piqued my curiosity...I'd really like to see a lemon in the near future. ^_^

-Lady-
 Reviewed By: Black Fury  On: April 10, 2003 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
sweet!
 Reviewed By: suzaku priestess [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 07, 2003 08:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
give me lemon. Me want lemon. Good, but still in need of lemon.
 Reviewed By: thalian [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 04, 2003 23:11 CST
Comment/Review:
good job. i would like to see more
 Reviewed By: EvenStar  On: April 02, 2003 21:28 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great chappie keep going.. and keep your word on updating soon! ^_~
 Reviewed By: joe  On: March 07, 2003 16:32 CST
Comment/Review:
please finish this im really looking forward to it
 Reviewed By: EvenStar  On: February 24, 2003 20:23 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i like this story really funny! although i don't always like raven/ryss this one is actually good kudos to you!keep writing this fic is great! looking forward to your next chappie!
 Reviewed By: Hunter0  On: February 20, 2003 19:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Awesome, great start, but...uhm...
where's the lemons?!!!

Hurry up and write more, PLEASE!

signed: a random, perverted bastard, fan of ZOIDS and the Raven/Ryss couple!
 Reviewed By: Hunter0  On: February 20, 2003 19:31 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awesome, great start, but...uhm...
where's the lemons?!!!

Hurry up and write more, PLEASE!

signed: a random, perverted bastard, fan of ZOIDS and the Raven/Ryss couple!
 Reviewed By: Hunter0  On: February 20, 2003 19:31 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awesome, great start, but...uhm...
where's the lemons?!!!

Hurry up and write more, PLEASE!

signed: a random, perverted bastard, fan of ZOIDS and the Raven/Ryss couple!
 Reviewed By: Raven  On: January 31, 2003 22:31 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a very good start to the story keep up the good would.I also like the pair raven/reese.
 Reviewed By: Vivi239  On: January 27, 2003 23:19 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very nice work, I hope to see a Ryss/Raven lemon soon!
 Reviewed By: suzaku priestess [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 18, 2003 13:37 CST
Comment/Review:
^_^ I like this alot. I love the Raven/Ryss pairing alot. Off topic a bit, where did you find the spelling for Ryss anyway? I always thought it would be Reese...
 Reviewed By: Eloy Brightdreamer [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 08, 2003 14:35 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Not a bad start! I've always liked the couple of Ryss and Raven. I'd like to see where you go with this!

You've got a good writing style, but you probably should have a betareader go over your work... there were a few spelling errors that a spell-check wouldn't catch. (For example, you had Ryss spelled as Reese in one line.)
 Reviewed By: no name/nick  On: January 03, 2003 05:23 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think this is the start of a really great story.

I like lemons alot.^_^

keep on writing.:) ^_^
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