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Title: Shuu-chan
Reviewed By: Shuu-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy, this is the deepest story I've ever read of Yu-Gi-Oh and it's fantastic. I'm just sitting here in front of my screen in awe right now...
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Reviewed By: G On: March 19, 2003 05:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You can't stop like that, leaving poor Seto in pain TT. Please continue. |
Reviewed By: Kris On: March 12, 2003 15:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Excellent story! Please continue! |
Reviewed By: Yami no Kaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 14:07 CST
Comment/Review:
*grins* So Yami finally caved and admitted that he was molesting Seth in the last chapter, eh? *snickers* Anyway, excellent chapter as usual (it had to be posted the day I couldn't get on a computer, didn't it?) Naoya's brother is kind of funny (map upside down? How can a person get a map upside down? any lettering on it wouldn't be readable!) and left a very interesting foreshadowing. And there was a lemon! A lemon that will have some very interesting side effects. ^^ The way you used the alcohol was very different then what I had been imagining. However, I think my favorite part was the whole Seth/Seto mirror moment. I take it Seth won't be popping up any more... Rats. But now Seto has a shit load of new memories he's going to have to come to terms with. ^_^ Now to anybody that's reading this that isn't Youko, Review!!! I wanna see what happens next soon! Besides, this story is definitely worth the measly few minutes it takes to write one and inspire the author. |
Reviewed By: Yami no Kaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 21:01 CST
Comment/Review:
^_^ Waii!! Lime and Seth in nothing but a bed sheet! yatta! *pokes Yami* You shouldn't put moves on a sleeping person, you hentai. |
Reviewed By: twistedhalo On: January 28, 2003 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! i love it. i was new to yugioh fan fiction and a huge kaiba fan and this fic was an amazing one! i am hooked! please write more, i want to see what happens to Kaiba! *wrings hands in worry* poor kaiba ! |
Reviewed By: Sunshadows [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 00:53 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I must say I'm very impressed by this fic. It's very disturbing, but you just can't seem to stop reading. ^_^ It's also refreshingly original. Please, post the rest of this soon! |
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 23:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting more complex. That Naoya is really creepy. Yami and Seth's past really make this story interesting. Reading "Distance" along with this story is great. |
Reviewed By: Solitaire On: January 27, 2003 05:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay, after that whole goldfish incident, on a scale of 1-10 on the creepiness scale, Naoya scores a 14. ::shudders:: You freaky creep, stay the hell away from Seto! lol As sad as this chapter was, I loved it. Poor, poor Seto-kun. What has that evil Naoya done to you now??? Ohhhh, and the flashes from their past lives are so sad. v_v Poor bishies. I'm dying to see how this is going to end. Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Yami no Kaiba On: January 26, 2003 19:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, you already know how I rate the creepy factor and why, so I'll just stick to the fic. You seem to be degenerating Seto's condition at a good enough pace, and the fact you brought the goldfish back again was neat. I have to say even if you feel guilty about the update being slow, I'm happy that it was as long as it was! ^_^ Poor love struck Yami, though... |
Reviewed By: Yami no Kaiba On: January 21, 2003 16:02 CST
Comment/Review:
^_^ Excellent!! I forsee Seth as being very pissed off at a certain pharaoh when he gains control. And this whole thing must be confusing the heck out of Yami and Seto, cause it seems Seto still remembers the previous dreams when he falls asleep again. I know you're very busy, so I won't press for a fast update. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Solitaire On: January 16, 2003 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best story I've read in quite a while. I love Seto/Yami stories--I know there haven't necessarily been any overt hints at that, but I'm cautiously optimistic. ^_~ I also really like your plot; I've always had an interest in amnesia and toyed with the idea of doing a fic on it myself (I loved the movie Momento, btw, you should really see it). Your flashback/nightmares are a bit confusing, but they're good that way, and I love the imagery you create. I really hope you continue this fic; it's fantastic! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: sparklehunter On: January 15, 2003 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh! pretty- this fic was excellent. keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Yami no Kaiba On: January 15, 2003 14:53 CST
Comment/Review:
^^ This chapter was great! And now it's leaving me really wanting to know what happened in Distance. Of course, I wanted to know for a long time, but now it seems more pronounced, 'cause it leaves the question of how and why Seth dies open, yet foreboding a really angsty way. Also, with Seth saying "become myself", it opens up the question of what's going to happen to Seto's personality when Seth takes over. Can't wait to find out! |
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and the prequel "Distance". They really compliment each other. The quick updates are appreciated also. |
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