| "A Fishy Tale" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: tenshinostar On: February 02, 2003 16:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this fic!
it is going great so far.
I hope there is a lot more to come. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: January 21, 2003 23:38 CST
Comment/Review:
That was an interesting chapter. Especially when Yugi asked if Yami would have sex with him. Kind-of amusing, actually. I hope you post another chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: Kirikou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 12:38 CST
Comment/Review:
It's great so far!Those two are so kawai together! Please write more soon! |
Reviewed By: Silent Yami On: January 15, 2003 08:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, I really like this fic so far please continue.Soon.
Ja |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: January 15, 2003 02:19 CST
Comment/Review:
I have no idea where you came up with this idea but it's a very interesting one I guess. It's a kawaii fic so far no the less. I can't wait for the lemon. I hope it won't be too weird or creepy because of the merman thing. ^^;; I will keep reading though so please update soon!!!! ^_^ Ja ne!
(Y+Y4EVER!) |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: January 14, 2003 18:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Yami is finally warming up to Yugi a little. I like this story, it's interesting and different from the other mermaid/merman stories that I've read. I hope you post the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: daidai On: January 07, 2003 10:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey i loved it but when r u going to finish it? |
Reviewed By: dai On: January 07, 2003 09:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
it could have been better |
Reviewed By: Chibi Sora On: April 12, 2003 09:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
I fink Yami and Yugi should be mermen forever... if Yugi wants, and Yami should be happy that Yugi is with him, and they will never get lonely. I also think Seto should help Protect Yami from the polution that Ten or whatever his/her name is going to dump into the water. Please Please Please hurry with the rest... i really think its a good story/fan fic |
Reviewed By: loanshark On: January 05, 2003 05:08 CST
Comment/Review:
nice! *grinz* btw, did yugi help yami or not? couldn't really get tt part, well update soon! :):) |
Reviewed By: Charmeleon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good so far. Please go on. You read my mind about Yami saving Yugi. I really liked chapter 1. When I read the part about Yugi falling into the water, my stomach virtually turned inside out. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: January 02, 2003 21:17 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a good chapter and an interesting way for them to meet. Is Yugi going to be turned into a merman or Yami back into a human so they can be together? I hope you post the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: Kirikou [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 07:07 CST
Comment/Review:
This is one of the most original yugioh stories ever. Please write more soon! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: December 16, 2002 18:27 CST
Comment/Review:
This story sounds like it could be interesting. Please post more of it soon. |
Reviewed By: loanshark On: December 17, 2002 18:25 CST
Comment/Review:
whoa...cool! this is really REALLY great, please update soon!! |
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