| "The Rebel's Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lonely Unicorn On: February 22, 2003 10:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You don't need help from others to keep writing. that would just ruin your flow. As a writer you need to know that you can control everything that is in the story. I you had outsside influence it might cause problems. I know writers block I know it well. To break writers block is easy just spend time watching movies you like, adn doing stufff you enjoy. The something will hit you and poof the writers block is gone. I always read books and watch movies realting to the story that might help as well. Please update soon. You have a most loyal fan out of me. You story is good and very original I never really liked gang stories, but I made an exceptiopn while reading the second chapter. the pairing is good and I am in love with all the problems that are happening. :) |
Reviewed By: Jen On: February 18, 2003 16:01 CST
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This is getting very interesting. I hope you update soon. I e-mailed you some ideas. |
Reviewed By: dragon of the darkness flame On: February 16, 2003 09:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic, update soon. I gave it all 10's because the writing style is easy to read, no spelling mistakes really stand out, i have never read a fic like it before, and i thought it was great overal, so please update soon! |
Reviewed By: the total lunatic On: January 23, 2003 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're fan fiction was good but not perfect wich isn't necisarily a bad thing. In the second and third chapters the story really slowed down. Your plot is really good. You have chosen an idea that you can have anything come out of it. You had great grammer but a few mess ups here and there(great because most people get nearly everything spelled wrong. Heh heh... I'm one to talk) Your story was great but either have Yuske(?umm wow don't know how to spell it...) and Keiko fall for each other or have them just be friends or have them hate each other(oops run on). You can't linger between all three in the same paragraph it doesn't work. Wow I really should write shorter reveiws. |
Reviewed By: shiningwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please make more chapters ppllleeeaaasssseeeee |
Reviewed By: The_Fallen_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 18:59 CST
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this great I can;t get enough of it please finish soon! |
Reviewed By: Kb_girl3 On: January 10, 2003 14:09 CST
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Great chapter! I loved the interaction between Yusuke and Keiko. Keep up the great work!!!
~Mei |
Reviewed By: Jennn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 22:22 CST
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Great chapter. It was nice and long too. I'm glad to see Keiko and Yusuke acting like their old selves together. |
Reviewed By: The _Fallen_Angel On: January 08, 2003 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!!!! One of the few YYH Fics I've ever liked. I hope you finish it soon.
The_Fallen_Angel |
Reviewed By: Kb_girl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 19:10 CST
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I have never been a huge fan of Keiko and Yusuke relationships(mainly for the fact that I dun like her). But I love the points you placed in your author notes chapter. Damn straight Yaoi and yuri are retarted...I mean no offense to anyone...but they are wrong. Nice job...flames can be stupid. Ignore that SOB and keep up the good work. We here still want to read more of your story. You are a talented writer....so just ignore the bull..
~Mei |
Reviewed By: LLy On: January 02, 2003 15:28 CST
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wow, i really like this story..the plot line is creative and i love yuusuke/keiko pairings! |
Reviewed By: Jennn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 00:19 CST
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Yes, yes, you updated! I wonder how Yusuke thinks Keiko looks now, all grown up? Please update, even though you just did. Start typing and things will just pop into your mind. Great Story! Thanks! Jen |
Reviewed By: Kayko Yukimura On: December 30, 2002 17:22 CST
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Youve gotta right more Rei-chan its great oh and by the way I wrote another fanfic called a strange way to fall inlove and its for Rurouni Kenshin so please check it out |
Reviewed By: Yu Yu Hakusho fan On: December 30, 2002 09:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this more then once. This could be the best Yusuke/Keiko fan fic! I hope you're working on the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Shelly On: December 26, 2002 10:43 CST
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I love Yusuke and keiko stories. I know this will be one of the best. Please update soon, please, please, please with a cherry on top. |
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