| "The Rebel's Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: HardCandyVegetto On: June 11, 2003 16:51 CDT
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Whores eh? well boys will be nasty stupid boys. lol whores.... lol that's the funniest word in the english language. |
Reviewed By: HardCandyVegetto On: June 11, 2003 16:31 CDT
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Yeah I remember that book. and the kids turned the school into their city or something. i loved that story. so i'll read yours. What was that book called again? |
Reviewed By: lizzy On: June 09, 2003 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it! Please keep going. i really want to hear Usgai's pathetic explanation of the whore thing! LOL LOL LOL LOL |
Reviewed By: DokuRyu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 22:08 CDT
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My raiting still stands. Your story is still pretty slow, but way better than most others(mine to speak of). All I'm waiting for is you to update the next chapter. I can feel for how annoying it is to be told over and over again to update, so I'll just wait patiently for it. |
Reviewed By: aown On: April 07, 2003 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ummm have yusake make up a story about needy to pull info out of them
them meaning whores |
Reviewed By: Jessie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 01:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story! Keep up the good work! I can't believe Yusuke kept whores! XD That is so great! I have more to say, so I'll email you.
~Jessie-chan |
Reviewed By: Paradisum On: March 09, 2003 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this was an incredible fic...the plot was original and I always like the fact that Yusuke can and will always be in fear of Keiko..see what a woman can do to the strongest of men...well, I hope you keep continuing, I would love to see Yusuke talk his way out of the supposed "whores" situation...Keiko is not going to like this!!! |
Reviewed By: Reine Spades On: March 09, 2003 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a BRILLIANT, WONDERFUL FANFIC!!!!!!!!!!! I just LOVE the creativity put into the story;) PLZ UPDATE ASAP...Bye-bye(^_~) |
Reviewed By: Lonely Unicorn On: February 22, 2003 10:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You don't need help from others to keep writing. that would just ruin your flow. As a writer you need to know that you can control everything that is in the story. I you had outsside influence it might cause problems. I know writers block I know it well. To break writers block is easy just spend time watching movies you like, adn doing stufff you enjoy. The something will hit you and poof the writers block is gone. I always read books and watch movies realting to the story that might help as well. Please update soon. You have a most loyal fan out of me. You story is good and very original I never really liked gang stories, but I made an exceptiopn while reading the second chapter. the pairing is good and I am in love with all the problems that are happening. :) |
Reviewed By: Jen On: February 18, 2003 16:01 CST
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This is getting very interesting. I hope you update soon. I e-mailed you some ideas. |
Reviewed By: dragon of the darkness flame On: February 16, 2003 09:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic, update soon. I gave it all 10's because the writing style is easy to read, no spelling mistakes really stand out, i have never read a fic like it before, and i thought it was great overal, so please update soon! |
Reviewed By: the total lunatic On: January 23, 2003 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're fan fiction was good but not perfect wich isn't necisarily a bad thing. In the second and third chapters the story really slowed down. Your plot is really good. You have chosen an idea that you can have anything come out of it. You had great grammer but a few mess ups here and there(great because most people get nearly everything spelled wrong. Heh heh... I'm one to talk) Your story was great but either have Yuske(?umm wow don't know how to spell it...) and Keiko fall for each other or have them just be friends or have them hate each other(oops run on). You can't linger between all three in the same paragraph it doesn't work. Wow I really should write shorter reveiws. |
Reviewed By: shiningwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please make more chapters ppllleeeaaasssseeeee |
Reviewed By: The_Fallen_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 18:59 CST
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this great I can;t get enough of it please finish soon! |
Reviewed By: Kb_girl3 On: January 10, 2003 14:09 CST
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Great chapter! I loved the interaction between Yusuke and Keiko. Keep up the great work!!!
~Mei |
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