| "Virus" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: December 23, 2002 15:29 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a really good story. I like the idea and having the Dark Magician come to life. When are you going to add Pegasus to the story? Anyway, please post the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: Icz On: December 23, 2002 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh it's getting interesting now. Despite being an avid YxY fangirl I really loved the Ryou/Bakura interaction here. [I liked the put your hand down scene.] Very sweet.
I'll throw my vote toward YxY. I love Kiba dearly but those two are just so darn cute together.
Icz |
Reviewed By: Neko and Inu-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2002 10:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Neko:I like this alot!
Inu:Is it because the title is 'Virus' like your oc, Virus??
Neko:Uh........NO!!!! BECAUSE ITS GOOD!!!! WE SHALL READ YOUR STORY HERE AND AT FF.NET!!!!!
Inu:*holds her ears* Please! Stop yelling!!!!
Neko:=^^= DO MORE!!!!!! ONEGAI!!! |
Reviewed By: Icz On: December 20, 2002 23:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Is bad to hope for a YamixYugixKiba three way? I'd like to see more. |
Reviewed By: Iczer6 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 21:49 CST
Comment/Review:
La Blue Girl and LotOF are tenticle porn anime. In other words they're anime series that revolve around cute anime girls getting raped by hideous, evil demons.
Don't ask me how I know this...
Keeping my fingers crossed for poor Yugi...
Icz |
Reviewed By: Ms. Prongs [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bloody Brilliant!
I FINALLY GOT AHOLD OF THE NEXT CHAPTER!
Yah!
Anyways, lovely story, purely amazing, especially that last part, I was hoping something would go right for them for once.
*blinks*
Figures, of course you add another little turn.
You say poor Yugi to my stories..but man girl.
I really have to say it.
Poor Yugi!
Oya oya! of course, another thing. Poor Bakura!
(You'll excuse my new fetish with him, it's quite scary..)
Anyways, I'm off to finish a sequal here..
One sitting, or 1 1/2 depending on what I can do here..
*blinks*
Get the next chapter out SOON
Or I'll have to go awol on you!
And trust me, it's not a pretty sight, just ask any of my friends!
*glares menecingly then taps her foot*
I'm waiting!
O_o;;; |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas On: January 10, 2003 16:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MOOOOORE oh Kami, you have to write more and now! This story is way too good to end there! Keep it up! You said you love reviews so here you go, a nice new review to hopefully encourage you to get the next chappie up soon. *Gets sparkly manga girl eyes* pweeze?
>Cody's MuseCody's MuseCody's MuseCody's MuseDiana^.^Diana@.@Cody's MuseCody's MuseCody's MuseDiana@.@ |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam On: January 16, 2003 12:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh I thought I'd put your questions in your review in my review here. I will be going over the identity of this mysterious being gradually as I get into the story so.... I'm gonna be cruel and make ya guess MUWHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Ands it's funny that you should say that about making a fic of doing nothing but ranting. It so happens that I have done a 'do nothing but ranting fic' it's the The New Authoress... it has no plot whatsoever... well maybe a little but it's nothing major... and it's bascially me doing stuff on the spot. I'm planning on doing a road trip in the next posting... so... Laugh until you die... that's my motto...
Seto: I thought it was 'Time for an enema...
O_O'.... ^_______^ *grabs him and go's into a room dragging him along, through the door you see Sam's shadow who is holding something very long*
Seto: NO WAY!!!!!!!! *Crashes and stuff* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGHHHH!!!!!!
BTW you want to know what an enema is? Well it's a way to insert medicine in the rectal area in the process of emptying the bowels.... MUWHAHAHAHA!!!! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas On: January 27, 2003 21:05 CST
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOO not a cliff hanger!
More more more more more more more! I have to have more!
Get the sequel posted soon, I have to know what happens!!!!!! PLEASE! |
Reviewed By: sweetdeath [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think but i'm not 100% sheru but yami mady all the mallaniam idams(can't spell)so don't all the powers belong to him???? |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: January 21, 2003 08:13 CST
Comment/Review:
I liked that chapter. It's coming down to the end. I hope you can post the last chapter soon! I really want to see how everything turns out! Please post soon?! |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 16:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yugi: O.O
I cant bealive u almost raped him In fact neither can he
Yugi: O.O
Will u plz continue so we can find out wat happens just not 2 graphic or I'll be 2 young 2 read it
Yugi: O.O |
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