| "Saiyajins Return" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice ficcy you have here!!!
Whats this about a special piccy?? I want it! Ok I'll have a crack at guessing the pairings..
Welll Vege wants the girl.. but then Ray seems intersted in Vegeta.. Goku is just a baka.... umm.. I can see Vegeta/Ray for some reason..
BUT since Geta wants the girl I will make it Vegeta/Kurai
Goku/Raife
But if Im wrong can I still have the piccy!!! Please!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything about this story is great, Gemi! I am really enjoying it and you write Vegeta soooo well!! I would have loved to see the expression on his face as he listened to that conversation between the siblings! lol! And being afraid of snakes and worms! haha! Priceless! Simply priceless! Keep up the good work and thank you soooo much for reviewing my own work! Your awesome! Love ya!
~Ami |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: July 30, 2003 08:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
*blinks* you're probably wondering why there's a big ol chunck missing in my last review... I don't no what happened... *rubs temples* but the part that should be there is...
Raife hissed, flustered.
And just in case it didn't work again... Its the part where Raife is looking for his pants and his sis is being all grumpy ^_^
Now *for the second time today... finally* Onward to chapter 6!! |
Reviewed By: Christina G. wytygr74@hotmail.com On: June 28, 2003 20:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's great so far! hope you continue. it sounds like both Ray and Goku have the jots for Vegeta. but then again, who wouldn't?
not me! |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: July 30, 2003 09:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
*Those brainless toadies* *giggles* I like it I like it ^_^
And true, not everyone wants to wear spandex... but when I rule the world *not if, but when* all good looking men with hot bodied will have to wear it *cackles evilly*
True, it was a bit short... but I don't mind ^_^ you just keep working on it at your own pace okay?
~Winged Revenge~ |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: July 30, 2003 08:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Fear not! No one scared me away! I've just been away from my laptop for three weeks due to a Geology trip and a holiday ^_^
I loved chapter five!!
The above has to be my favourite bit!! *hehehe* And I'm so proud of you guys... the updates were fairly close together!! So kudos to you ^_^
*runs off to read chapter 6* |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: June 01, 2003 03:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAAAY!! New chapter ^_^
Poor Kurai, I take it something nasty happened to her *makes a sad face*
And I love the Vegeta shower scene, I just love a yummy Saiya-jin all wet... I have this thing about water ^_^ I love to swim and stuff ^_~
That was good... but you better keep writing! I look forward to the next installment!! *if that's how you spell it* *heh* ^_^; |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: April 30, 2003 06:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*YAY* New chapter!! Just what I've been looking for ^_^ so thanx muchly for the update... and I too happen to think *uber* is a fantastic word which should be used more often :P
And Raife is too cool... Ouji-sama this... Ouji-sama that... but Veggies ego could certainly do without all that petting don't ya think *lol*
Plus... I take it something bad happened to the newbies... most likely something to do with people in lab coats yes? Poor babies ^_^
Well... I loved it and once again look forward to more! |
Reviewed By: Tank-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 14:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this ist great stuff !!! Really inventive and full of spirit *happygrin* I like your stile ! Pleeeease keep up the good work ^^
Tank Girl |
Reviewed By: mistress by the arts On: March 11, 2003 15:34 CST
Comment/Review:
next one please? soon? yes? a bribe!
i love your story and can't wait to read the next chapter! :) |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: March 11, 2003 11:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yep, West City is the home of the Capsule Corporation, however in the Japanese episodes its called West City Capital
YAY!! NEW CHAPTER!! *dances around* I'm so HAPPY that you're continuing it ^_^ And I think a certain teenage boy and a certain third class baka have their eyes on a certain Saiya-jin flame haired male... although the Ouji seems to be going for the young female... Oh the intrigue!!
*This is getting SO good*
Please!! I doesn't matter if all the other baka's that read this don't review!! Please keep going with this for me!!
~Winged Revenge~ |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: January 28, 2003 10:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You deserve even nicer comments from lots of other people too!! I've been waiting for this update for EVER! So I'm very glad to see that you haven't given up writing it ^_^
Good chapter... it was a little short but hey... no ones perfect right ^_^
CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!! GOOD LUCK AND HAPPY WRITING! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 22:06 CST
Comment/Review:
This is pretty interesting :) I love the characters! keep it goin! |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: December 20, 2002 12:17 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Interesting... very interesting and I like Yaoi!! I just hope there isn't any incest *shivers* I really don't like that *ick*
And Saiya-jin having a DVD player and stuff... that's a new concept...
Good luck writing more! |
Reviewed By: wawashkeshi On: March 11, 2003 17:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonder why they're afraid of Bulma? New characters always throw loops into the settled lives of our favorite Saiya-jins. Good story thus far, hope to read more soon. |
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