| "Crimes of Passion" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 17:32 CST
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umm...... ahhhhh tough descision...... mmm ok how about vegeta and bulma..... but a nice girl shows up for radditz to be paired with as well.... sniff i like happy endings.. it'll be sad if either of them get their hearts broken |
Reviewed By: anomonus On: February 06, 2003 21:22 CST
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Vegita |
Reviewed By: Lara On: February 06, 2003 20:49 CST
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I am so sick and tired of starting to read a good V/B story and then the author decides that while she originally intended it for it to be that way, she reads comments of others and decides to have Bulma go with someone else. It's really annoying and disappointing since this has happened more times than I care to count. Oh well, since you've already contemplated changing it, you're most likely going to go with Radditz, so I'm just going to stop reading it here and move on to other fics. |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 21:13 CST
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whoo hoo..... mmmm sleeping with vegeta...lucky bulma |
Reviewed By: Maria S. On: January 29, 2003 21:28 CST
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I have fanarts, I want you to see them, go to http://www.ffump.com/indexhigh.htm website! |
Reviewed By: heyheyhey On: January 23, 2003 21:21 CST
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i like it alot and im just doing this so i can read the newst update!!!:-D |
Reviewed By: Maria S. On: January 23, 2003 20:27 CST
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I loooooooove Radditz he is one of my favorite character I drew some pictures of him if you like me to send them I just need an e-mail address! Mines is MariaScy17@netscape.net |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 01:43 CST
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ohhhh awsome so for can't wait for the next one |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 21:55 CST
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ohhhhhhh bad monkey leaving us guessing can't wait for the next one |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 23:25 CST
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lol coolies so far keep it up ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I'll admit that I've been reading a FEW of those "Bulma-is-Vegeta's-slave stories" lately. Until now, my favs of the bunch are the darker ones (by which I mean the NASTY/sadistic Vegeta types). However . . . I'm liking this one. An "honorable" Vegeta is a nice change of pace (I like him MUCH better that way anyway).
And you know what . . . I always did have a LITTLE thing for Radditz. ^_~ What can I say . . . all the more hair to cuddle up with. *giggles*
SO . . . what's the big warning about the mating season? Just the fact that most males are going to be going crazy? (OH, and could you add somemore details of it: how long it lasts,the side-effects,etc) So does that mean that both Vegeta AND Radditz are going to try and seduce her?!?! COOOLness!! XD
Who do I want her to end up with!?!? Uh ... *holds head in contemplation* ... it hurts. Well, I'm a V/B fan at heart, but I like the idea of her POSSIBly falling for Radditz. I just hope that HE doesn't turn out to be the jerk of the fic and she runs to Vegeta instead. *shrugs* It could happen.
My only tip . . . don't forget to add scenes with their tails!! Why? Uh ... let's just say that SOME of us have little fantasies of a silky soft Saiyan tail caressing-- uh, nevermind!! *snickers* I just meant that I like cute little details like the Saiyan tails subconsciously holding onto what's ... theirs. *hinthint*
Well .... I like this so far!! ^_^ Umm, if it's not a problem, could you email me when you update this story??? (duonotsuin@yahoo.com) Thank you, and happy writing! :) |
Reviewed By: Vampkestrel On: January 04, 2003 01:19 CST
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cool keep going ^_^ |
Reviewed By: heyheyhey On: January 03, 2003 14:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi im a BIG fan of bulma-is-vegeta's slave and i havent read it yet but i hope it's as good as u make it sound!:o) |
Reviewed By: Anna On: January 02, 2003 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so far. Pleaseeee update as fast as you can. It's really good. |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 05:44 CST
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OK, I am SO not a fan of B/V AU romance fics... but I was bored so I decided to take a peek, and I kinda like what I see so far. (The fact that you actually have good spelling & grammar helps.) I got a soft spot for Radditz and for a second I was hoping Vegeta would give Bulma to him. >:) But I do like how he was characterised, and I would read further chapters to follow that.
For what it's worth those are my thoughts. ^_^ |
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