| "Crimes of Passion" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maria S. On: January 29, 2003 21:28 CST
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I have fanarts, I want you to see them, go to http://www.ffump.com/indexhigh.htm website! |
Reviewed By: heyheyhey On: January 23, 2003 21:21 CST
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i like it alot and im just doing this so i can read the newst update!!!:-D |
Reviewed By: Maria S. On: January 23, 2003 20:27 CST
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I loooooooove Radditz he is one of my favorite character I drew some pictures of him if you like me to send them I just need an e-mail address! Mines is MariaScy17@netscape.net |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 01:43 CST
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ohhhh awsome so for can't wait for the next one |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 21:55 CST
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ohhhhhhh bad monkey leaving us guessing can't wait for the next one |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 23:25 CST
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lol coolies so far keep it up ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I'll admit that I've been reading a FEW of those "Bulma-is-Vegeta's-slave stories" lately. Until now, my favs of the bunch are the darker ones (by which I mean the NASTY/sadistic Vegeta types). However . . . I'm liking this one. An "honorable" Vegeta is a nice change of pace (I like him MUCH better that way anyway).
And you know what . . . I always did have a LITTLE thing for Radditz. ^_~ What can I say . . . all the more hair to cuddle up with. *giggles*
SO . . . what's the big warning about the mating season? Just the fact that most males are going to be going crazy? (OH, and could you add somemore details of it: how long it lasts,the side-effects,etc) So does that mean that both Vegeta AND Radditz are going to try and seduce her?!?! COOOLness!! XD
Who do I want her to end up with!?!? Uh ... *holds head in contemplation* ... it hurts. Well, I'm a V/B fan at heart, but I like the idea of her POSSIBly falling for Radditz. I just hope that HE doesn't turn out to be the jerk of the fic and she runs to Vegeta instead. *shrugs* It could happen.
My only tip . . . don't forget to add scenes with their tails!! Why? Uh ... let's just say that SOME of us have little fantasies of a silky soft Saiyan tail caressing-- uh, nevermind!! *snickers* I just meant that I like cute little details like the Saiyan tails subconsciously holding onto what's ... theirs. *hinthint*
Well .... I like this so far!! ^_^ Umm, if it's not a problem, could you email me when you update this story??? (duonotsuin@yahoo.com) Thank you, and happy writing! :) |
Reviewed By: Vampkestrel On: January 04, 2003 01:19 CST
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cool keep going ^_^ |
Reviewed By: heyheyhey On: January 03, 2003 14:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi im a BIG fan of bulma-is-vegeta's slave and i havent read it yet but i hope it's as good as u make it sound!:o) |
Reviewed By: Anna On: January 02, 2003 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so far. Pleaseeee update as fast as you can. It's really good. |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 05:44 CST
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OK, I am SO not a fan of B/V AU romance fics... but I was bored so I decided to take a peek, and I kinda like what I see so far. (The fact that you actually have good spelling & grammar helps.) I got a soft spot for Radditz and for a second I was hoping Vegeta would give Bulma to him. >:) But I do like how he was characterised, and I would read further chapters to follow that.
For what it's worth those are my thoughts. ^_^ |
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