| "Metamorphosis" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kamui No Miko On: February 28, 2003 08:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really believe that this is one of the best Saiyuki fanfics I have ever read. The emotions of the chracters are canptured in a way that enraptures the reader. The reader's attention will be grabbed by the way you have described the relationship between the Sanzo-ikkou, something which is never explained fully and is usually lef hanging. I feel that it is a marvellous puece of work and is impatient for the next installments. I hope that after you have fini8shed this fanfic, you will continue to write, be it original stories or fanfiction. I am sure that your work will definitely be appreciated and enjoyed by one and all. |
Reviewed By: random saiyuki fan On: February 10, 2003 07:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic has already manifested such great talent in you, and a mastery of Saiyuki that goes far beyond romance. Your understanding of the characters' secret hearts (especially Sanzo) is deeply moving, and to read about them and the agony that binds them is a wonderful experience, since VERY few have really grasped the essence of their complexity. And you're one of the blessed authors who reached this level. That keen and remarkable insight on the Saiyuki characters combined with a superb, powerful writing style that really comes from the heart produces a glorious fic of quality reading.
The only detail that prevented me from giving this a 10 in the Spelling and Grammar category is the reference of Kougaiji to his mom - is it my eyes, or did I see "Haha me"? I'm no fluent Japanese speaker, but I think a more appropriate word for that is "Hahaue", which means something like "honorable mother".
That aside, this is an outstanding fic. How about posting this on www.fanfiction.net? (Just put this in R for rating, since they don't accept NC-17.) Maybe I've explored a small circle, but I think this is probably the most popular fanfic site on the web.
I will be waiting for updates! Don't leave all who swoon over your fic hanging (I'm one of them)! |
Reviewed By: lis On: February 05, 2003 18:57 CST
Comment/Review:
YESSS!!! you've added...i am soooooo happy...TWO chapters from my last visit...SANKYUUUU!!! i haven't even read it yet but i am already bursting with excitement.....
to genjo sanzo: yep, you're right!:) |
Reviewed By: CTFA(Crissania) [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 08:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CTFA- YAY!!! YOU RULEEEE!!! I HAVE NEVER READ SUCH A GOOD FANFICTION IN YEARS!!
Vince- Wow! I mean I don't like Yaoi but...OH! MY BUDDA!!
CTFA- YOU MUST CONTINES!! BUT PLEASE I BEG YOU!! MAKE GOKU SOMEHOW IMPORTANT!! MAKE HIM SPECIAL!! MAKE HIM BE USEFUL AND NECESSARY!!! PLEASE!!! I BEEEEEEEEEEEG YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANKS! AND CONTINUE PLEASE!!! |
Reviewed By: CTFA(Crissania) [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 08:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CTFA- YAY!!! YOU RULEEEE!!! I HAVE NEVER READ SUCH A GOOD FANFICTION IN YEARS!!
Vince- Wow! I mean I don't like Yaoi but...OH! MY BUDDA!!
CTFA- YOU MUST CONTINES!! BUT PLEASE I BEG YOU!! MAKE GOKU SOMEHOW IMPORTANT!! MAKE HIM SPECIAL!! MAKE HIM BE USEFUL AND NECESSARY!!! PLEASE!!! I BEEEEEEEEEEEG YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANKS! AND CONTINUE PLEASE!!! |
Reviewed By: Mrs. Nadir Rusalki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 08:06 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm really happy you updated and don't worry about me waiting because I very well understand your situation and as I've told you already, this fic is worth the wait :)
This one's very sweet esp. the last part. A very nice Sanzou indeed! Will there be a KouXSanzou in the future? ;) Ja and happy chinese new year! |
Reviewed By: Shadow Arashi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 09:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeees!!!!!!!! You post another chapter! I was waiting for the next bit and I have to say I'm veeeeeeeeeery happy with it. ^_^
I love how you show the change in the characters' attitude and personality. I can't wait for more really.
And what's the big deal with Sanzo's hidden powers? When do we get to know what those powers are about? Damn, you leave me hungry for more, go you! |
Reviewed By: genjo sanzo On: January 14, 2003 10:33 CST
Comment/Review:
pls complete this fic... i'm so excited! i did rate it but all i can say is... so far so good!
i love sanzoxgoyo, if you don't mind.
to lis: if i'm correct, you've read addicted to love by madamhydra right? |
Reviewed By: lis On: January 14, 2003 00:44 CST
Comment/Review:
i have rated ur fic so i won't do it again...WHAT???!!! u haven't continued it yet??? plezzz don't make me suffer.... i waited each day in agony....inform me when u do ,ok? |
Reviewed By: lis On: January 10, 2003 10:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sugoiii!!! i truly loved and awed by it! you descibed them (especially sanzo_sama ) with perfection that it took my breath awaay with their beauty ( especially sanzo again..=) ) though you could i am a little uneasy with gyumou lusted after kou. and besides a have read a yaoi pairing of kou and sanzo and it says that sanzo's skin is softer than any of them because human skin are better than youkai's rough one. heh..just a thought and do continue soon...love yah and ur fic!!!!-_~ |
Reviewed By: LN Tora On: January 01, 2003 21:39 CST
Comment/Review:
::completely ignores the numbers:: The mean nothing, and can't really convey how much I've enjoyed this fic.
I have to say I really liked chapter five, simply because (though I know where the main focus is), I'm a Gojyo angst fan, so that really hit hard. But then I've enjoyed all of this fic, and do hope to see you continue. |
Reviewed By: sf On: December 30, 2002 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sanzo angst! Yay!
As always, the ending of the chapter had me clicking at random links and going : "What? No more? How can there be no more?" *wail*. Great stuff, truly great stuff. The idea of such a strong spiritual bond is extremely interesting and one that I hope you'll explore in more detail in subsequent chapters.
(Sanzo angst! ^_______^)
I wonder.. will the rest really be safe in Eden? And how will they find Kanzeon at this rate? And if the rest are safe, what's going to happen to Sanzo-sama?
Looking forward to your next update,
sf |
Reviewed By: Mrs. Nadir Rusalki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I’ve ranked you, ok? I don’t always do that because I don’t trust my ability to
judge things by numbers but your story is just
WICKED!
There's a satisfying amount of everything... from humor, to angst and
perversion. Just enough to keep a perverted mind like mine writhing for want of
the next installment. Gambatte ne! Kou X Sanzou sounds great and Yaone X Kou
too... but oh, not
Sanzou X Hakkai please... *pretty please* |
Reviewed By: blinkie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent fic! one of the best i have ever read, and ive read a TON of them. i like your plot. its very original. the writing style is stupendous too. you portray the characters perfectly. even when the characters would seem OOC, you successfully make them seem like the normal way these characters would act udner the circumstances. for example: sanzo and kougaiji uniting under the threat of Gyumao; their friendship; lilin's care for sanzo, etc.
ive only read the story once, but im sure i'm going to read it for countless more times to come. ^_^
great job! i am amazed. i bow to you.
love,
blinkie |
Reviewed By: Shadow Arashi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2002 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I see you finally post your fanfic here. ^^ I'm very glad you did and even more glad to be the first to leave you a review here.
So I know I said it before but I will say it again: I love it! It's great and I can't wait for the next bit! ^_~
Good job my friend. |
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