| "Precious Little Rin" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Smarty Cat On: December 27, 2002 17:07 CST
Comment/Review:
This was beautiful in its own way, sadly realistic and bordering on heartbreaking. You had me tearing up a bit, Dove. You protrayed Fluffy perfectly: cold, arrogant, distant, seemingly indifferent. I'm glad he finally told her the truth at the end though even if it was to late. At least she got to hear him say it. I think you did very well at keeping them in character, and I can't wait to read any more ventures into the IY fandom that you may choose to do. |
Reviewed By: saki dacerbet On: December 25, 2002 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good read. I was nearly in tears. |
Reviewed By: llalaru On: December 25, 2002 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello war dove,
i just wanted to tell you how much i enjoyed your story. i am not a person that cries easily, but i came pretty close this time! keep up the good work.
hugs,
llalaru |
Reviewed By: dancehottie50 On: December 24, 2002 12:43 CST
Comment/Review:
That was really really good but it was sad at the same time. Curse Sess. Demon pride |
Reviewed By: MysticIceDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2002 21:28 CST
Comment/Review:
*cries* that was sooo good, yet sooo sad ;.; |
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