| "The Game of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: Eluwei [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2009 22:40 CDT
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I just came across this. It's really good. I hope you pick it back up soon.
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Reviewed By: Sessh_Luver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 09:25 CDT
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u hav to write more...this is really exciting...btw, y cant inuyasha smell the change in kagome's scent that would tell him she's pregnant?........MORE!!!!
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Reviewed By: akire_erika On: July 10, 2005 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.....................................MORE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lonewolfcries [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, So far this is a great story. Just curious, all the bad guys know about Kagome. When will Kagome and the others know? And who's going to tell Inuyasha first? Kikyo (B***H!!), Sesshoumaru? Kagura? or Naraku? (Which he would probably wait until the heat of battle when Kagome is about to be attacked or to distract Inuyasha at a critical moment) Anyway great story! And I hope you will soon put up the next Chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next. ~Lonewolf
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Title: Your good
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please make Inuyasha return to Kagome!!! Thanx I love your story....
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Reviewed By: inuyasha' On: January 28, 2004 08:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
up date now !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Bleu On: June 17, 2003 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was true to the storyline. Really good. All six chapters. |
Reviewed By: 4U2NV On: June 16, 2003 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Considering its not your native tongue you write VERY good. You chose a nice plot and Kagome and Inuyasha act the way they'd normally act. It seems like Naraku to take advantage of every little new thing. I'm like on the edge of my seat waiting to see how everyone is going to fit in place. Personally This is one of the best storys i've read. Nothings to mushy. Later on I bet it'll get a little violent knowing Inuyasha. Update Soon! |
Reviewed By: Jeff1 On: May 28, 2003 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please countinue this is quite intriguing and I can't wait to see what twist you will add next. |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 19:03 CST
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PS -- THANK YOU for remembering your human reproductive biology, that the child wouldn't be concieved until sometime after the actual act. |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo! Sesshoumaru AND the youkai nazis are showing up? Something tells me all heck is about to break loose. I await the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: CreativeJenn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2003 23:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh! Update soon please! |
Reviewed By: angle-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 20:21 CST
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ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu...
I hope Kikyo goes to hell...again!
What happens to Inu-Yasha and Kagome! Is she ever going to find out that she's pregnant?
oh! I can't wait! Please up date soon!!!
angle-chan |
Reviewed By: Chibi Mizu Tenshi On: February 04, 2003 22:36 CST
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AHH! You can't leave us like that! Please update soon!! ^_^v |
Reviewed By: The Critic On: January 26, 2003 11:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent fanfic! Everything about this fanfic comes into place with Naraku's plans. Its actually such a good fic, I was partially hoping that Naraku would succeed just to see what would happen. PLease update this fanfic soon, I am eager to see what transpires. |
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